Writing Application Letters
Application Letter
There are some mistakes and ambiguous expressions in the following application letter for a job as a salesperson. Rewrite it after making the corrections or amendment to it.
|Human Resources Department |
|Avon Products (Guangzhou) Ltd. |
|3?f 420, E. Huanshi Road |
|Guangzhou 510075 |
| |
|July 3, 2009-9-26 |
|Dear Sir or Madam: |
| |
|Noticing the enclosed advertisement in today’s Yangcheng Evening Newspaper, I wish to apply a part-time job as a salesgirl for|
|the direct selling of your beauty products. |
| |
|I am a junior student at Guangdong College of Commerce. My major is Marketing. I studied Marketing, Marketing Techniques, |
|Psychology of Consumption, Psychology of Women, Business Law, Labor Law, Business Ethics, Communications, Public Relations, |
|etc.
There are some mistakes and ambiguous expressions in the following application letter for a job as a salesperson. Rewrite it after making the corrections or amendment to it.
|Human Resources Department |
|Avon Products (Guangzhou) Ltd. |
|3?f 420, E. Huanshi Road |
|Guangzhou 510075 |
| |
|July 3, 2009-9-26 |
|Dear Sir or Madam: |
| |
|Noticing the enclosed advertisement in today’s Yangcheng Evening Newspaper, I wish to apply a part-time job as a salesgirl for|
|the direct selling of your beauty products. |
| |
|I am a junior student at Guangdong College of Commerce. My major is Marketing. I studied Marketing, Marketing Techniques, |
|Psychology of Consumption, Psychology of Women, Business Law, Labor Law, Business Ethics, Communications, Public Relations, |
|etc.