Write A Rhetorical Analysis On A Hospital

Hospitals often elicit surprising emotions from incoming patients; feelings of dread, mortality, and a loss of control. These emotions come contrary to the goal of a hospital: to heal, to help, and to provide a general sense of positivity. Of course the former emotions are valid, but they are seemingly over-dramatic with the goal of a hospital kept in mind. The author of this account carefully crafts his writing using diction, strong details, and a specific tone, to paint his hospital visit in a negative light, and to remind us all of why hospital visits are so terrifying.
The use of diction in the account provides the basis of a negative feeling throughout the text. From beginning to end, the author carefully picks his words to provide a negative, ominous, and fearful connotation to the meaning of his sentences. For example, when the author describes his change in attitude at the beginning of the ambulance ride, he uses specific words to …show more content…
In this account, the author describes everything is such great detail that nothing but dread and fear is left to the reader’s imagination. These strong details elicit a specifically engineered response and emotion, and help paint the hospital visit in a certain light. When the author describes the hospital room, he includes specific details to invoke a feeling of dread. “Later, I was to become very fond of my tiny womb-like room, and because it was windowless, I christened it ‘the Monad.’ But on that ghastly, ominous evening of the 25th, seized by fever and fantastical neurosis, shaking with secret dread, I perceived everything amiss and could do nothing about it.” When describing the room, the author describes it as “womb-like”. This tiny detail completely changes the perception of the room. It paints it in a light of darkness and uncertainty. It changes from being a simple room to being ominous and having a sense of