I worked hard on it, and I hope it showed to my audience. Although, not perfect by any means. I would have liked to have a little more eye contact and after watching my speech I realized I miss spoke on the statistics of breast cancer and spoke the fact there were 231 women with breast cancer, when it should’ve been 231,000. That’s a huge mistake, and was pretty disappointed in it. If I could do the speech over I would give more eye contact, not make the mistake of facts about breast cancer, and most of all, try to calm my nerves. The persuasive speech of policy was difficult for me, but was a good challenge. With it being such a challenge I felt I did fairly well. This speech definitely broadened my skills. Although, if there is a next time for a persuasive speech I will remember the ways to help improve to make my delivery a better
I worked hard on it, and I hope it showed to my audience. Although, not perfect by any means. I would have liked to have a little more eye contact and after watching my speech I realized I miss spoke on the statistics of breast cancer and spoke the fact there were 231 women with breast cancer, when it should’ve been 231,000. That’s a huge mistake, and was pretty disappointed in it. If I could do the speech over I would give more eye contact, not make the mistake of facts about breast cancer, and most of all, try to calm my nerves. The persuasive speech of policy was difficult for me, but was a good challenge. With it being such a challenge I felt I did fairly well. This speech definitely broadened my skills. Although, if there is a next time for a persuasive speech I will remember the ways to help improve to make my delivery a better