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Week 6 Persuasive Dialogue
(The scene opens with Jason, up before everyone else, drinking a cup of coffee and staring out into space. He looks curiously at the planet, wondering what adventures await him there. Now that he knows the Glactians are after them, it puts a different spin on things. This means any ship, any planet, any new species, could be a potential threat. Jason doesn’t like that feeling.)

(In a the next scene, Jason, Caleb, Rex, and Nikki are down on the small planet, investigating. Everything about the place seems deserted. It’s nothing but dark blue rock and green sky as far as the eye can see. For about an hour, the team walks and climbs about, seeing if there is anything useful for them there.)

(Rex is standing by himself on a large pile of rocks.
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(Thinking quickly, Jason draws a large net, casts it over the little creatures, ties them up, and throws the lot of them into a pile of sand. They’re already clawing and biting their way out.)

Rex (on the ground): Are you kidding me!? (It really bothers him that such little creatures got the better of him.)

(Rex tries to get up but quickly feels a sharp pain in his knee, and screams.)

Caleb: Rex! Are you okay!?

Rex: Errrrggkk!! My leg!!

(Nikki pulls out her communication-watch to contact the Captain.)

Nikki: Mayday! Rex is injured! We need assistance!

Captain (through communication watch): Roger that. We’re sending out Team M. Try to get Rex closer to the ship, so he can get there faster.

Nikki: Understood.

(Nikki turns to Jason and Caleb.)

Nikki: Jason! Caleb! Help me bring Rex to the ship.

Rex: Errrrrrrrrrrrhh…

(Team M helps them inside the ship. The irritated little creatures, now free of the net, are hurling small rocks and stones at the ship as it takes off with Rex inside.)

(The next thing we see is Rex sitting at the edge of a hospital bed with his leg extended and a leg brace strapped on.)

Dr. James: So, what happened, Rex?

Rex: What do ya think happened!? I broke my

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