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“Valentine” Throughout the poem the poetess compares love to an onion and she does that by using a variety of techniques such as imagery, symbolism, word choice and structure. All these techniques justify why “Valentine” is an unusual love-poem as they help the poet express her different point of view. The poet makes some other key suggestions on how love makes a person feel. Carol Ann Duffy shows that love is not simple nor always pleasant. \ Throughout the poem, the poetess is comparing love to an onion. Onions provoke tears while love is meant to bring happiness and joy. Therefore, the main symbol makes this love-poem an unusual one:“ It will blind you with tears Like a lover “Onions have a strong scent that makes us cry when we cut them. The poet refers to crying over somebody loved, like you would over an onion. Being ‘blinded’ suggests not being able to see straight - usually when one is blinded from love In love, one can never be fully certain of the lover’s feelings and this insecurity can only be broken by eternal commitment which is the wedding“ Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding-ring, if you like. “On the inside, onions are layered into light rings each getting smaller. The word ‘shrink’ describes how the layers of the onion get smaller whole ‘loops’ are circles. Circles are eternal : they have no start nor end and represent how love should be : infinite. ‘Wedding-ring” is a final promise lovers will make to one another when getting married and ‘ring’ is the representation of their promised forever. However, the author suggests insecurity by giving the lover an option as if being unsure of one’s feelings : ‘if you like’. Unusual to express insecurity.The poem has a unique free verse structure and lacks a fixed pattern. This reflects how love is unpredictable. Carol Ann Duffy also used repetition of negative sentences to express her objection to outdated valentine-gifts :“ Not a red rose or a satin heart. (…)Not a cute card or a kissogram. “Repetition of the negative highlights how these gifts are not necessary once you think about the true meaning of love and makes the poetess’ objection easier to remember. Carol Ann Duffy applied a double alliteration to ‘red rose’ and ‘cute card’ to achieve easier remembering. The poem “Valentine” holds onto some strong imagery that makes the reader realise how everybody perceives love in a different way :“ It will make your reflexion a wobbling photo of grief “Onions arise pain and tears by bringing discomfort when they are being cut. Their unpleasant scent causes tears and when crying, everything seems ‘wobbly’. Also, the grimace is reflected in the tears. This example of imagery makes the reader imagine as if one was crying of a cut onion and a pained reflexion of one’s face could be seen in one’s tears. The word ‘photo’ represents a captured moment that would not last, ‘wobbling’ explains that tears were spilt in which one’s ‘reflexion’ mirror image, could be seen. ’Grief’ has negative connotations and it is a word describing sadness, loss, pain or death. This poem is therefore unusual, as tears, grief and loss are things one would not want to read about in a love-poem. According to me, love should be the exact opposite of how the poetess views it, but I think she must have been through a negative experience. All the while, the unusual love-poem “Valentine” was bringing new meanings behind love to reflect upon. Carol Ann Duffy used negative words to achieve deliberation in the reader :“ Lethal. “Love can become dangerous and insecure : it can never be justified whether the lover’s feelings are equally strong. The word ‘lethal’ is a negative word suggesting dangerous and devastating nature of love. This love-poem is an extraordinary one because the poet considers love to be deadly and fatal. Carol Ann Duffy makes a suggestion that love hits without warning and it is unexpected, just like an onion’s scent hits one. Love gives no warning that its coming : it is unpredictable. Again, “Valentine” is an unusual love-poem because in love, we want to feel as secure as possible, not wanting to expect any surprises. That is why, , we are usually blind to the fact danger can come anytime, without warning. Throughout the poem, a variety of techniques were used by the poetess to alienate it from other, common love-poems. Carol Ann Duffy has done that by supporting each verse with strong word choice :“ fierce “Stereotypically, love is viewed as something gentle and subtle which is the exact opposite of how the poetess see’s it. The word ‘ fierce ‘ has negative connotations as it is associated with aggression and attack. In “Valentine” , a kiss of an onion is being described as ‘fierce’. This is because onions have a strong and a possessive scent that will stay with you for very long; hard to get rid off. An onion’s scent attacks you, arising tears and pain. Fierceness is something least expected from love as a relationship should not be possessive nor aggressive. The poetess provokes the reader into considering this love poem an unusual one as the amount of negative words would not normally be associated with love. I believe that a ‘fierce’ relationship brings no good : its filled with rage and tension which can mean a soon parting of ways, caused by the constant disputes. The love-poem, “Valentine” written by Carol Ann Duffy has been an unusual one to analyse as it expresses a diverse point to the usual representation of love. Throughout this romantic poem, I was constantly made to think twice over what I thought to be the real meaning behind love. This poem opposed all my previous beliefs on this matter, as no other love poem would give such a truthfully pessimistic outlook on it. I believe that “Valentine” is a solitary poem that manages to break love down into all its faults, providing demotivating precautions on what might happen if you forget that love is mortal. I found that “Valentine” has taught me that love is only a fragile feeling that might not last and that you can never b sure of your lover’s equality of feelings. I felt deeply moved studying this poem, because love is a matter that as some point will affect me, and Carol Ann Duffy prepared me for the worst, through the poem “Valentine”. In what ways is the onion like Duffy's love?

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