Thesis Essayy2
Mallory Langpaul
Period 4
November 22nd, 2014
Dear Sir or Madam, I am shocked and appalled at your defective candy product, Exploderz. I regret to inform you that this product is grossly deficient. After ingesting just one serving, Exploderz kept my three children and husband up sick for an entire night. They leave a terrible aftertaste and, on top of that, cause internal damage to one’s body. I recommend a quick removal from the market in order to prevent anyone else from experiencing this type of sickness and pain. Foremost, eating Exploderz gave symptoms like food poisoning. My family’s bodies were rejecting the snack by both vomiting and having diarrhea. The whole family was up all night throwing up, gagging, burping, and coughing, which lead to exhaustion because the Exploderz made them so sick. It is weeks later, and many of the symptoms have continued. This creates the first major problem for your product, as well as gives me concerns for the health and well-being of my family. Studies show that, when children get sick from food, there is a 40% chance they will never eat again. My husband, who is a well-regarded doctor, said “the Exploderz caused the illness and something like this should never happen to the public. When you sell a product, it is the company’s obligation to test it first so things like this don’t happen to innocent consumers.” The word obligation informed me that you are required to check your product before selling it, when obviously, you did not.With everyone in my house sick from one serving of candy, it is hard to keep up with the kids’ academic studies and after school activities. My children are falling behind because of consuming your product; that is unacceptable. If making my family sick was not enough, they taste atrocious and caused my family to gag. The flavor was not enjoyable and left a strange aftertaste. The package clearly stated a “guaranteed amazing fruity flavor that everyone loves.” When someone guarantees
Period 4
November 22nd, 2014
Dear Sir or Madam, I am shocked and appalled at your defective candy product, Exploderz. I regret to inform you that this product is grossly deficient. After ingesting just one serving, Exploderz kept my three children and husband up sick for an entire night. They leave a terrible aftertaste and, on top of that, cause internal damage to one’s body. I recommend a quick removal from the market in order to prevent anyone else from experiencing this type of sickness and pain. Foremost, eating Exploderz gave symptoms like food poisoning. My family’s bodies were rejecting the snack by both vomiting and having diarrhea. The whole family was up all night throwing up, gagging, burping, and coughing, which lead to exhaustion because the Exploderz made them so sick. It is weeks later, and many of the symptoms have continued. This creates the first major problem for your product, as well as gives me concerns for the health and well-being of my family. Studies show that, when children get sick from food, there is a 40% chance they will never eat again. My husband, who is a well-regarded doctor, said “the Exploderz caused the illness and something like this should never happen to the public. When you sell a product, it is the company’s obligation to test it first so things like this don’t happen to innocent consumers.” The word obligation informed me that you are required to check your product before selling it, when obviously, you did not.With everyone in my house sick from one serving of candy, it is hard to keep up with the kids’ academic studies and after school activities. My children are falling behind because of consuming your product; that is unacceptable. If making my family sick was not enough, they taste atrocious and caused my family to gag. The flavor was not enjoyable and left a strange aftertaste. The package clearly stated a “guaranteed amazing fruity flavor that everyone loves.” When someone guarantees