Thesis About Bottled Water
Outline
I. INTRODUCTION
TOPIC: Bottled water
HOOK:
THESIS STATEMENT: effects on humans, environment and oceans
BODY
II. FIRST EFFECT: Humans
SUPPORTING DETAILS: Bottled water has many bad things for our bodies.
III. SECOND EFFECT: Environment
SUPPORTING DETAILS: Bottled water has many chemicals that contaminate the environment.
IV. THIRD EFFECT: Oceans
SUPPORTING DETAILS: We think we recycle bottled water but they end up oceans.
V. CONCLUSION: Bottled water has many effects on us and environment.
SUGGESTION: People should change the way they think about bottled water.
CLOSING COMMENT: People need to take care of the earth.
Brenda A. Gomez
IEP 261-262
Final Draft #2
11/15/14
Word Count: 639
Bottled Water
“Roughly 1.5 million tons of plastic are expended in the bottling of 89 …show more content…
“Some people have literally gone to drinking bottled water because they are concerned about their water, and the problem is they are unaware of the fact that buying bottled water is not necessarily safe, that you end up being exposed to other chemical compounds,” cautioned Stephan King, (PH.D., M.P.H.) a toxicologist and epidemiologist with Toxicology Inc. Bottled water can actually lead to health concerns for those with a weak immune system, such as the elderly, infants, and cancer, transplant, and HIV/AIDS patients (NRDC, 1999). According to healthnews.org, the chemical compounds released by these plastics can alter hormones and have other potential human health effects. Melissa Jarrell, (PH.D.) assistant professor of criminology at Texas A&M University, stated, “We don’t know what the long term consequences are to this type of exposure. They’re not conditioned to think, well, maybe there is something in the plastic” Therefore, are a barrage of chemicals that bottled water contains, and people are neither taking this serious nor make the time to search more about what they are
I. INTRODUCTION
TOPIC: Bottled water
HOOK:
THESIS STATEMENT: effects on humans, environment and oceans
BODY
II. FIRST EFFECT: Humans
SUPPORTING DETAILS: Bottled water has many bad things for our bodies.
III. SECOND EFFECT: Environment
SUPPORTING DETAILS: Bottled water has many chemicals that contaminate the environment.
IV. THIRD EFFECT: Oceans
SUPPORTING DETAILS: We think we recycle bottled water but they end up oceans.
V. CONCLUSION: Bottled water has many effects on us and environment.
SUGGESTION: People should change the way they think about bottled water.
CLOSING COMMENT: People need to take care of the earth.
Brenda A. Gomez
IEP 261-262
Final Draft #2
11/15/14
Word Count: 639
Bottled Water
“Roughly 1.5 million tons of plastic are expended in the bottling of 89 …show more content…
“Some people have literally gone to drinking bottled water because they are concerned about their water, and the problem is they are unaware of the fact that buying bottled water is not necessarily safe, that you end up being exposed to other chemical compounds,” cautioned Stephan King, (PH.D., M.P.H.) a toxicologist and epidemiologist with Toxicology Inc. Bottled water can actually lead to health concerns for those with a weak immune system, such as the elderly, infants, and cancer, transplant, and HIV/AIDS patients (NRDC, 1999). According to healthnews.org, the chemical compounds released by these plastics can alter hormones and have other potential human health effects. Melissa Jarrell, (PH.D.) assistant professor of criminology at Texas A&M University, stated, “We don’t know what the long term consequences are to this type of exposure. They’re not conditioned to think, well, maybe there is something in the plastic” Therefore, are a barrage of chemicals that bottled water contains, and people are neither taking this serious nor make the time to search more about what they are