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The Rollercoaster-Personal Narrative
The roller coaster

I'm in the line of a twisty ,tall ,long ,green , and scary roller coaster. Im sure you have been on a twisty roller coaster but I for instance have not It's three stories of stairs to climb and if you don't call that high for a roller coaster I don't even know what to say. And i'm not what you call brave I have long brown hair the color like stained wood. I have eyes as blue as the evening sky , lips as red as blood skin as white as snow and well a skidis personality. My friend Maya is going with me and well she is like the opposite of me she has medium sized hair that is blond, the color kind of looks like as if you were staring into the sun but instead of hearting it is beautiful . She has Blue eyes like
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But then i realized she was the coolest girl in school so i kept with her.

As we got in the front row on the big green roller coaster I had this feeling in my stomach , it felt like a million oversized butterflies inside me . The roller coaster lady slammed the belt against my chest and buckled it as if my stomach didn't already heart. The roller coaster started going forward as it was i was thinking that it isn't that bad but i spoke too soon it made a drop , with my hair flying up and me flying but the belt stopped me from flying off as if it was the only thing keeping me from death so i held on as tight as i could . As the roller coaster went side to side and up and down it stopped sure was i glad that was over. I wa struggling to get out maya said hold on as the rollercoaster jerked back and we started doing the same thing over again but

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