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The Narrator's Changes At The Party
Have you ever read a book you didn’t like well I have and that’s what i be explaining.One reason I hated the book ungifted is it was boring ,The party was boring because the daniels got away with destroying TIn Man,The Daniels kept punching tin man. The beginning of the story, There wasn’t enough going on. I didn’t like how the narrator's changed at party,when they changed narrator's I didn’t know who was talking.It got confusing at other points,Sometimes when they narrator's I didn’t know who was talking.
I didn’t like how there wasn’t enough action at the party,there could have had more action instead of Noah jumping off the thing.At the end of the story there wasn’t enough action,nothing really happened at the end of the story.
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