The Hawaiian Mermaid Alternate Ending

The Ravine Ending: He had never seen anything so beautiful in his life. Vinny took a deep breath. He closed his eyes, leaned forward, and jumped. He smacked the coffee tinted water. Vinny had done it! He looked around to see where his friends had went. Vinny swam under the water looking for them. Then he found a cave behind the ravine waterfall. He went inside to check it out. Vinny took baby steps. He was scared. A chill went down his back. On Vinny’s 11th baby step, he stepped on something muggy and sticky. He looked down and saw...the dead boy. He ran outside of the cave and ran to the police department. When he arrived he took the police to the mysterious ravine. He told them that his friends went missing. The police all went into the cave,
Vinny ran home as fast as he could. He asked himself why did he come out but not anyone else. When Vinny arrived at his house, his mom asked where he had gone. He lied and said that him and his friends went to the beach. He went to his room and lied down. He promised himself that he would not tell anyone about what had happened.

2. Hawaiian Mermaid: “Sky, Sky! Where are you?” called Granny. “Yes! I am coming for afternoon story time!” yelled Sky. “I am ready, please start!” “Alright and Happy early Birthday Darling!” said Granny softly. “ Once upon a time eleven years ago today a baby was born. A baby girl named Rose. She lived in Hawaii. She lived on the beach. She had always felt that the ocean called to her, like she was connected to the ocean though she had never touched it.” “This sounds exactly like me!” said Sky excitedly.
until now… It was 4:30 am when I heard the gunshot. I jumped out of bed ran to my parents room, but of course they were heavy sleepers so they did not hear it. I went back to my room and sat on my bed, wondering about where that sound came from. I looked outside of my window and saw the island. It was on fire. I saw dead people on the island. I could tell who they were, hunters. Then I saw him for the first time ever. I saw the dark ARMY green fur, the wispy glossy eyes, and the big scruffy enormous belly. A chill went down my back. He looked at me. I froze. I could tell what had happened. He stared at me and then he jumped in the water with a big splash. He stood there, watching his home go down in flames. I watched and I still couldn’t move. It was like my body had shut down. The monster started to grab handfuls of water and splashed it on his island. He tried and tried and tried to save it. Then 10 minutes later his home was wet but was not on fire. My body started back up again and then I went outside swan to his island. I helped him get rid of the bodies, splash his island, and help his animal friends. I could tell that he was disappointed that he killed those hunters but, he wanted to live. To me they deserved to