The Government Is Not Doing Enough To Help Veterans Thesis Analysis
Jared
Thesis: The government is not doing enough to help veterans.
Quotation/ Excerpt: “100 million dollars pledged to refugees, $4,000 per refugee, per year goal of 25,000 refugees”
This quotation from his presentation is effective because it supports and proves his argument as he shows where the government is spending its money. It is effective to prove that the government is not helping veterans as they do have the resources, however, they are not investing the money to help veterans.
2. Blake
Thesis: The current school system is outdated and should change.
Quotation/Excerpt: “Developing brains aren’t ready to learn until 10:00 am, 19% grade improvement”
This quotation is effective towards his presentation because it is actual statistics that have been proven. It is not just a student saying this because they are complaining …show more content…
It was effective to the audience because it gave his presentation more credibility. It was interesting how he quoted the reference to the source of the information, instead of the actual fact in the source.
6. Sam
Thesis: Grey’s Anatomy gives a false sense of what is it like being a surgeon
Quotation/Excerpt: “This is one of my favourite shows, so I’m not bashing it at all”. Sam used good uses of video clips for her presentation.
This quotation was effective towards her presentation because it shows that she is not shaming the show, while she is just helping the viewers see the actual side of being a surgeon. Her use of videos was effective towards her presentation because some people may have never seen Grey’s Anatomy and it was creative of how she showed a video clip for every argument.
7. Ethan
Thesis: Edward Snowden is a hero for leaking NSA surveillance information of which they spy on its citizens.
Quotation/Excerpt: "Abraham Lincoln once said ‘Government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the
Thesis: The government is not doing enough to help veterans.
Quotation/ Excerpt: “100 million dollars pledged to refugees, $4,000 per refugee, per year goal of 25,000 refugees”
This quotation from his presentation is effective because it supports and proves his argument as he shows where the government is spending its money. It is effective to prove that the government is not helping veterans as they do have the resources, however, they are not investing the money to help veterans.
2. Blake
Thesis: The current school system is outdated and should change.
Quotation/Excerpt: “Developing brains aren’t ready to learn until 10:00 am, 19% grade improvement”
This quotation is effective towards his presentation because it is actual statistics that have been proven. It is not just a student saying this because they are complaining …show more content…
It was effective to the audience because it gave his presentation more credibility. It was interesting how he quoted the reference to the source of the information, instead of the actual fact in the source.
6. Sam
Thesis: Grey’s Anatomy gives a false sense of what is it like being a surgeon
Quotation/Excerpt: “This is one of my favourite shows, so I’m not bashing it at all”. Sam used good uses of video clips for her presentation.
This quotation was effective towards her presentation because it shows that she is not shaming the show, while she is just helping the viewers see the actual side of being a surgeon. Her use of videos was effective towards her presentation because some people may have never seen Grey’s Anatomy and it was creative of how she showed a video clip for every argument.
7. Ethan
Thesis: Edward Snowden is a hero for leaking NSA surveillance information of which they spy on its citizens.
Quotation/Excerpt: "Abraham Lincoln once said ‘Government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the