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Irene looked back making sure no one was close enough to get hit with the flogger when she swung back. She lifted the flogger and smacked down whipping her diagonally then quickly whipped in the other direction making an X over and over. Her sub scream and moaned. She stopped and gave a couple rubs on her angery ass giving her sub time to breath. Irene continued whipping her. Each time the flogger hit John could faintly feel its many leather tongues licking and his ass as it did the subs. He shook his head thinking to himself that this wasn't the best time to me fantasizing. Sherlock noticed the way John started at the flooger. His mouth a gap and his pupils dialating. He saw how he scolded himself by shaking his head. Sherlock saved this bit
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