He uses vivid imagery to depict the terrible mental effects that the war had on young men in the first stanzas. Here, he compares the young soldiers to elderly people due to their physical condition. "Bent double, like old beggars under sacks, knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge." The metaphor is used to show that the soldiers’ heavy bags are weighing them down to the level of the 'beggars', portraying their weakened and unhealthy state despite being young and energetic soldiers. Owen also emphasise the soldier's condition through simile. "Coughing like hags" explains how these young men were suffering from illness due to the sludge and fumes from the decaying bodies of their fallen comrades as they have been exposed to diseases. As a result, this highlights how men have been prematurely aged when returning to the trenches for a period of rest where they didn't felt like proud military men marching in uniform, depicting the suffering and exhaustion that the soldiers have undergone during the excruciating
He uses vivid imagery to depict the terrible mental effects that the war had on young men in the first stanzas. Here, he compares the young soldiers to elderly people due to their physical condition. "Bent double, like old beggars under sacks, knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge." The metaphor is used to show that the soldiers’ heavy bags are weighing them down to the level of the 'beggars', portraying their weakened and unhealthy state despite being young and energetic soldiers. Owen also emphasise the soldier's condition through simile. "Coughing like hags" explains how these young men were suffering from illness due to the sludge and fumes from the decaying bodies of their fallen comrades as they have been exposed to diseases. As a result, this highlights how men have been prematurely aged when returning to the trenches for a period of rest where they didn't felt like proud military men marching in uniform, depicting the suffering and exhaustion that the soldiers have undergone during the excruciating