I can find only one tiny nit to pick with your essay. Here it is: In your lead sentence you say,
"The civil rights movement was the time in America in which Blacks and other minorities started getting more independence
The Civil Rights movement was a movement, not an era. You could rewrite this sentence just a bit to say something like, "The era of the Civil Rights movement..." etc etc
Other that that, I think your essay is aces. You give good supporting documentation, and you've surely done your homework to use those famous legal cases. Hope your teacher likes your essay as much as I did. Bravo!
From the earliest years of European settlement in North America, whites enslaved and oppressed black people. Although the Civil War finally brought about the abolition of slavery, a harsh system of white supremacy persisted thereafter. In the early twentieth century, African Americans in the South and in many parts of nearby border states were banned from associating with whites in a host of institutions and public accommodations—schools, hospitals, old folks’ homes, rest rooms, waiting rooms, railroad cars, hotels, restaurants, lunch counters, parks and beaches, swimming pools, libraries, concert halls, and movie theaters. Some recreational areas posted signs, “Negroes and Dogs Not Allowed.” Racial discrimination deprived Southern blacks of decent jobs and schools and of elementary rights of citizenship, including voting. White intimidation and violence, including lynching, remained an ever-present threat. Outside of the South, blacks had legal rights, but they suffered from widespread discrimination and from de facto residential and school segregation. Black and white liberal reformers struggled to ameliorate these oppressive practices, forming groups like the NAACP in 1909 and the National Urban League in 1911. South Carolina’s Septima Clark established Citizenship Schools for civil rights across the South, and North Carolina’s Ella Baker worked to...
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