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Prologue Thunder cracked throughout the dark night. The wind blew through every town, bringing fear with it. But one home was oblivious to this, the wide castle that sat gazing upon the kingdom of Ardalane. Screams echoed throughout the castle walls, causing every person to cringe in worry. The screams belonged to their beloved queen, who was birthing her first child. The king stood out side the room temped to burst into the room to help his wife, but he knew where he stood and could not help her. Inside the room, the queen was sweating, tears streaming down her face blinding her. "Push, my lady, push!" screamed the nurse. The queen complied, pushing with all her remaining strength. After minutes and minutes of pushing, the queen heard a faint cry. "You did it, my queen!" …show more content…
"A girl," the queen repeated. "I shall name her" "A beautiful name. Shall I call the king?" "Please do" The king shortly rushed into the room, rushing to the queens side. He knelt down and look gave a look of awe at his newborn daughter. "Meet your new daughter, " "We have a daughter!" The king exclaimed. He began to cry covering his mouth with is hand. He reached for and held her in his arms. He walked her over the balcony, and looked out at the kingdom. The full moon shown bright over his kingdom. "One day," he told , "this will all be yours." She began to cry, prompting the nurse to take hold of her. The king sighed in relief knowing his two girls were safe.
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As the king and queen of Ardalane stood smiling at their new born daughter as she lay in her bed, a stranger entered their kingdom. This stranger, dressed head to toe in black, hiding their face behind a cloak, strode towards their chamber. When the stranger opened the wooden door that closed off the king and queens bedroom, the kind quickly reacted and reached for his sword, pointing it towards the door. "Who dares breech these halls?" the king

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