The Causes Of Homelessness
The speaker had a fantastic introduction with an attention getter, beautifully written thesis statement, and preview statement. The speech was organized in cause and effect fashion including two causes for homelessness and their effects, and I thought this made the speech easy to follow and relate to. He also included transitions between each of his three main points, and he had adequate supporting information for each point as well.
The speaker’s ability to speak extemporaneously was quite good because he seemed very prepared to speak, but it would have been better had he been able to add more emotion to the speech. Although, he gave a great introduction with a well thought out attention getter and thesis, he seemed to be just remembering previous times he had given his speech. I would have been more engaged had he seemed less bored with what he was saying. Since his topic is a quite touching one, I naturally felt a little engaged, but I think he easily could have used this to his advantage to highly immerse his audience by their