The Best Age to Get Married
OPINION PARAGRAPH outline *Topic: What you think is the best age to get married
*Topic sentence: I think that the best age to get married is bout 25 years old
*Supporting sentences
- Fact: there are many people too young to get married
-Explanation: + they are too young to understand carefully everything
+They are supported a great deal of things from their family, so they do not bother about anything
-Experiences: my elder sister has get married when she was 25 years old. Now she has a happy family because she has a good work and do not support anything from her parents before she gets married
*Concluding sentence
I think that we should not get married early
PARAGRAPH
Nowadays, a lot of people have got married early when they have just about 18 to 20 years old, but I think that the best age to get married is about 25 years old. First, at this age, most of people have a good job and stable life. They hardly need to many support from their parents, if you get married early, you will take many difficult problems about financial. Second, at this time, your body developed completely. You are able to give birth babies strongly, and they will grow up normally as other children when they are taken care of full. Then, you also have knowledge of many things to understand carefully. Example, my elder sister got married when she was 25 years old. Now she has a happy family because she has a good work anf do not need many support from her parents before she got married. In my opinion we should not get married
*Topic sentence: I think that the best age to get married is bout 25 years old
*Supporting sentences
- Fact: there are many people too young to get married
-Explanation: + they are too young to understand carefully everything
+They are supported a great deal of things from their family, so they do not bother about anything
-Experiences: my elder sister has get married when she was 25 years old. Now she has a happy family because she has a good work and do not support anything from her parents before she gets married
*Concluding sentence
I think that we should not get married early
PARAGRAPH
Nowadays, a lot of people have got married early when they have just about 18 to 20 years old, but I think that the best age to get married is about 25 years old. First, at this age, most of people have a good job and stable life. They hardly need to many support from their parents, if you get married early, you will take many difficult problems about financial. Second, at this time, your body developed completely. You are able to give birth babies strongly, and they will grow up normally as other children when they are taken care of full. Then, you also have knowledge of many things to understand carefully. Example, my elder sister got married when she was 25 years old. Now she has a happy family because she has a good work anf do not need many support from her parents before she got married. In my opinion we should not get married