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That's My Story 'American The Beautiful'
1. The “That’s My Story an I’m sticking to it”: this is another word filler to just meat the expectation of the essay length. The writer obviously only wants to get it over with the essay and write the information already know by the reader.
2. The “Sherlock Holmes”: These strategy is use to “wow” the reader with a story touch in the introduction and left un clear. The conclusion will be a great palace to solve the mystery. But this strategy would be better use in an informal or informational essay. A persuasive or argumentative essay is more informal for something with a sense of playful strategy.
3. The “American the Beautiful”: This is like throwing flowers to the essay and making it seem full of life, the writer just let his emotion get
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