Superheros In Kids Research Paper

My paper is about how the experiment is not reliable, and how superheroes have a much more positive effect than a negative one. The audience is my English class. They effected my decision by causing me to word certain things differently as supposed to this being for the president of the school. I did well on making my paper clear, and understandable. I struggled with making my summery interesting. I learned that some strange people think superheroes are bad for society. My classmates comments caused me to change my thesis. I do not have any questions about my draft.

Super Aggression in Kids Despite super heroes being known as a major force for good in science fiction stories and movies, Tom Jacobs says that children emulate their violent behavior, turning good kids into violent trouble makers. Two hundred and forty pre school kids were examined , and tested one year apart. After a year it was discovered that the super heroes these kids so intently watched had no effect on the kids when it
First of all the sample size is very small. Two hundred and forty children is not a reliable amount. The findings could easily just be a coincidence. There should be a group in almost every state for these findings to be taken more seriously. All the participants are in the Western United States, which is not spread out enough to be at all meaningful. Also the experiment is conducted by asking kids, and their parents questions on a survey. It is easy to lie in this situation for parents, because they do not want their child to be looked down upon, so they could have lied about their behavior. Obviously, the kids questionnaires are not reliable either, because they are little kids. They are not aware of themselves so they can not accurately answer questions about themselves on a deep emotional level. Another reason this is not a reliable experiment is because almost every little boy