Summary Of Peer Review Of Sharon Cantoral '
Victor Fuentes
Peer review for Sharon Cantoral
1. I thought the paper was really well written. It made the story a lot clearer and her explanation gave the story more life. She gave good references and related very well to the story.
2. She gave a good interpretation at the end of the paper and explained how the story was actually about love and patience.
3. She gave evidence of it when she mentioned symmetry with the pigeons and sky. I wrote my essay on the same story and she gave good points that I never thought of like the symbolism of blue.
4. She briefly mentioned structure other than how the flashbacks. She did not mention language but she talked about narration and how being written in Otima’s point of view was beneficial
Peer review for Sharon Cantoral
1. I thought the paper was really well written. It made the story a lot clearer and her explanation gave the story more life. She gave good references and related very well to the story.
2. She gave a good interpretation at the end of the paper and explained how the story was actually about love and patience.
3. She gave evidence of it when she mentioned symmetry with the pigeons and sky. I wrote my essay on the same story and she gave good points that I never thought of like the symbolism of blue.
4. She briefly mentioned structure other than how the flashbacks. She did not mention language but she talked about narration and how being written in Otima’s point of view was beneficial