Anthony it’s always important to use proper tone, words, and etiquette when writing to your classmates or instructors. In your response it’s important to be clear who your talking to because there’s a fine line between professional and personal. Keep in mind of your audience. When you started you said, “Hi Guys” that greeting is more personal then professional. I can see why that might be offensive to woman because you use phrase like that throughout your response to your discuss question. It seems as if your response is towards your male classmates instead of to everyone. Try to use appropriate greeting in your message. Try saying, “Hi everyone” for example.
It is necessary for others to feel you have given thoughtful