State Fair Narrative

This year in the beginning of August My family and I went to Springfield IL. for the Illinois State Fair. We were going to show our excellent show pigs. When we got there it was about 10:00 P.M, and it took us about thirty minute to set everything up and get the pigs in their pens.(compound sentence) When my family and I were heading home, we stopped at Casey’s. I got Prarie Farms chocolate milk and Chewy Sprees. The we began our hour ride home, and I was looking forward to the next day.(Compound sentence)
When we got to the Illinois State Fair on Sunday I almost forgot that it was the Barrow show. That was the show I was showing in, and I was showing a Duroc barrow. I was so excited I could hardly eat my breakfast, a sausage, egg, and cheese