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Respected Sir/Madam,

I want my statement of purpose to be reviewed.Please take time to look into it and tell me how to improve it and what changes need to be made.

Thanks!!!
Anuradha.

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"The person who makes a success for living is the one who sees his goal steadily and aims for it unswervingly". Throughout my life I have always done things for the realization of my goals. In my early age, I was an obese child, and was generally mocked by fellow classmates because of that. I lost 25 pounds with my sheer determination and hard work. During those days I would do around 1000 sit ups. I started by doing 10 or 20, but I had challenged myself that I will do 500 in two weeks and then 1000 in one month and I did it. One thing I realized, with this whole incident is that if you have put your heart into something and you are ready to work hard towards it, there is nothing you can't achieve. Due to this rigorous exercise, I started enjoying sports in general. I have won many running competition and relay race in school and college.
I have always had a strong inclination towards science and math's and through my penchant hard work, always stood first in my class. I thoroughly enjoyed studying physics, chemistry and math's. I was always fascinated by the various facets of science. I would read books of undergraduate level, during my high school just to satiate my curiosity. I got a very good rank in the engineering entrance, held by the state. I was among the top 10%, of the people who were selected. I was the first girl from my school to get through the entrance. I got the college of my choice and the branch of my choice. The first time I used computer was in my 9th grade. At that time itself I was intrigued as to how it works. I joined some classes to learn computers but I was not satisfied by just learning excel, word etc. With the desire to learn deep, I selected