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Scary: A Narrative Fiction
Scary:
Its dark and so silent that I could hear a penny drop. However, there’s screeching every few minutes. I can feel a person staring at me but there isn’t anyone there. The lights flicker and I hear a woman scream down stairs. Echoing in the dead silent house in less than a minute. I feel this warmness rush through me and my heart rate has accelerated. My breathing is heavy and I am trying to quietly move down stairs. I feel my hand become saturated with something goopy. My eyes widen as there is a man with dark clothing and something covering his face. He has a knife with bright red fresh blood at the end of the stairs. “You are next,” his deep crisp voice states as he walks out the door. I am unable to move. I am shaking and my chest has this overwhelming pressure. I fall and go blank.
Happy:
My heart is filled with joy and there isn’t a moment a smile is knocked off my face. Friends and family surround me chattering and laughing as
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I love the sound of birds and bunnies jumping around. The skies are a soft blue and the wind is blowing just enough for the perfect breeze. My face stuck in a book as I am escaping the real world. All my worries and stress are slowing disappearing. I finally feel calm and at peace as I continue to read. There is no worry or stress anymore.
Paradise to me:
I am in the mountains with the most beautiful nature ever created. The waterfalls our crystal clear. Many animals surround me as birds, fish, moose, and much more. You cannot hear anything beside the wonderful sounds of nature. There is no technology to cause any problems. I am with the people that I love the most and we all enjoy this wonder place. We all no longer have worries, stress, or pain and are always relaxed. As we might take a swim in the creek or lake. Sit around a fire and talk and laugh. We are just filled with joy and happiness and never upset. We couldn’t be anywhere more

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