I now struggle less coming up with my body paragraphs because I have a list of ideas of what each paragraph will be about. As with spelling and fragments I still make mistakes. I don’t think there’s anyone who doesn’t have grammar errors. However, I try to minimize it as much as possible, by going over my paper more than once and by having someone other than myself read it and revise it because chances are they can catch an error that you might have missed or didn’t see. Furthermore, my understanding of 9/11 has changed drastically throughout this semester. Before I did not know detailed information that I now know today. All I knew before was the basic understanding of what it was and when it occurred, I had never went this in depth on learning everything that occurred. For instance, I got to read books where they explained who was behind the 9/11 attack and information about the leader of the organization. In addition, I also learned which towered collapsed first and the way the buildings were laid out through the
I now struggle less coming up with my body paragraphs because I have a list of ideas of what each paragraph will be about. As with spelling and fragments I still make mistakes. I don’t think there’s anyone who doesn’t have grammar errors. However, I try to minimize it as much as possible, by going over my paper more than once and by having someone other than myself read it and revise it because chances are they can catch an error that you might have missed or didn’t see. Furthermore, my understanding of 9/11 has changed drastically throughout this semester. Before I did not know detailed information that I now know today. All I knew before was the basic understanding of what it was and when it occurred, I had never went this in depth on learning everything that occurred. For instance, I got to read books where they explained who was behind the 9/11 attack and information about the leader of the organization. In addition, I also learned which towered collapsed first and the way the buildings were laid out through the