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Realm: A Fictional Narrative
Swoosh! The train passes through the city. I’m still thinking about what happened to Alison. I can feel my heart picking up its pace, but it feels as if my whole universe has collapsed.
“Hey, Alison,” I hear a faint voice say.
“Oh look, it’s Miss Perfect on the ground.” I can hear the voices getting louder and louder, commenting on me. Then my eyes start to slowly open. It is blurry, and I can barely see the people hovering over me, although I can feel the embarrassment getting to me; it is like I am getting hunted down by someone.
Suddenly, I feel a tight grip on my hand, lifting up all my sore weight. Then, I hear cheering and clapping. I don’t understand, nor do I see. Every little thing is either blurry or an incorrect colour.
“It’s okay,
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