Intro: My speech _________....Watching myself on tape……I did several things well, however there are a couple of items that I can improve on.…
3. What is the occasion for your speech? A ceremony, party, or just a speech for class? You will need to handle the speech differently depending on who is in the audience.…
During this persuasive speech, I once again started out slow (meaning during the introduction), but it eventually progressed and was much more easier to understand compared to the Informal Speech I had previously given. As soon as I had gotten more comfortable, it started to flow much better. My transitions between paragraphs made it clearer for my audience to follow. My points used were difficult to come by, but the goal of the speech to persuade my audience was still there and was still effective. If the points were more clear, the speech would have been better than it allegedly turned out. I do not have much strengths during my speeches, but what I can do to get better is to think of what I am going to say during my speech with the help…
The second thing that I feel was a bad aspect of my speech is reading my paper. For the most part I don’t think I was reading off of it that much, but at points I forgot where I was at. I had to look at my paper and remember where I left off.…
The first thing that I noticed in my introduction is that I need a better attention grabber. It was good, but there is definitely a better way to get the audience’s attention. The biggest thing in my speech that I noticed the most was the eye contact. I tend to look down at my notecards a lot. I review my speech over and over again before I give it, and almost memorize it, but it is my worst fear to speak in front of people so that is why I look down at my cards so much. Also, I have my cards too close to my face. The second thing that caught my attention while watching myself was that I need to have more gestures with my hands. Having a little bit more mobility with my hands will put more emphasis on the things that I am trying to say to the audience. The power point that I made was simple, but I feel like it got the points across and corresponded with my speech. I thought my tone throughout the speech was good. I feel like my tone of voice is very personable with the audience and not too soft or loud. Another thing that I thought I did well was pausing. I let my information sink in with the audience with a pause. I tend to use a lot of head movement when I’m speaking, and it is distracting to the audience. I used some humor in my speech by giving funny pictures and saying some things in my speech that made the audience laugh. I gave some time to let the humor set in with a pause and then proceeded to go on with my speech, so I thought that I used humor in my speech pretty well. My speech needs to be more conversational. When I watched myself speak, it seemed like I was reading it a little bit. With a more conversational way of speaking, you can attach yourself to the audience rather than reading your speech. Saying that, when I was speaking I was standing with good posture and speaking with a good tone. Even though I may have not been speaking conversationally, I think that my posture made up for it a…
I went the first day, so I don’t have a recording to look at. Even though I cannot see my speech I still realized some of my strengths and weaknesses. Some of my weaknesses consisted of: bad transition words, sounding shaky within the introduction, and time. My strengths consisted of: good movement, good tone, good statistics, and good eye contact. To start off my introduction I was very nervous, and I don’t know for sure, but I think the audience could tell. My transition into my first main point was not the best, but once I was in my first main point I was able to settle and really stroll through the rest of my speech. Within my speech I was able to incorporate many statistics to make my point why horse slaughter is needed although I am still…
In my first speech of the class, Any Old Bag Speech, I focused on getting the audience to me and like me for who I am. When I watched the speech on acclaim I realized that I used a form of verbal immediacy. Verbal immediacy directly relates to judgments of a speaker’s competence and character and includes the use of personal examples, humor, addressing others by first name and asking questions that solicit viewpoints or opinions. Using humor and personal examples in the speech certainly helped me relax because I could tell the audience was enjoying my speech instead of nodding off due to boredom. It also gave me confidence in my ability to speak in front of people, which is one of the main purposes of this course.…
My speech was organized. I felt my introduction was short, sweet, and straight to the point. In the beginning I was originally going to engage with my audience by asking,…
Having a presentation the first day of school was both scary and exciting, but being challenged in different ways than what we are used to, is something I have been looking forward to. I had chosen to speak about talk-show host and personality Oprah Winfrey, who has been an inspiration to me reasoned her strong motivation and drive for what she believes in. After my presentation my thoughts were that it went okay, even tough I had been nervous and a bit stressed in advance. If I were to say my biggest strengths, it would be that my English is good, that I am perceived as sincere and for the most part speak clearly without a script. Speaking to low was my biggest weakness, and I also could have used my nonverbal communication better.…
I was touched. My investment was worthwhile, and they were listening it. In this speech, I thought that I did well in these several areas: Firstly, I still was proud of my PowerPoint. The strong visual aids were very powerful. For example, when I compared with two boys’ life, it clearly showed the difference between the developed and developing countries, and could influence audiences’ emotion. This was a way of pathos which I learned from class. Secondly, I also still clearly and logically focused on topic. I previewed my main points and thesis in the beginning of my speech and repeated these in my conclusion. Compared with last speech, I felt I have improved in these areas: first of all, I tried to keep eye contact with my audience, and thought some related points, and get their attentions. For example, I used the hottest and nearest news like Black Friday crazy shopping to provide relevance to audience. Moreover, my transitions were more fluent and connect to contents than last speech. In addition, I found reliable resources from ASU library or other authoritative references such as World Bank databases and the executive director of Greenpeace. Fourthly, I control and adjust the number of my words in speech draft according to my speech rate in order to finish on time. Finally, I practiced more times and clearly remembered my organization, so I felt more…
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