Pregnancy Narrative-rough
ROUGH DRAFT
Thesis: Experience is the only way a person can truly understand being pregnant.
Intro:
What’s it like having a baby? Is it all glow and perfect happiness? I want to share my pregnancy experience start to finish. I want to share the good, bad, and painful. Experience is the only way a person can truly understand being pregnant. It’s a roller coaster ride the whole way through. Let me tell you about my ride. More to intro
Body 1-finding out-redo some sentences, reword a few things.
I was frustrated and depressed again. I had taken another pregnancy test that was negative. I wanted to be a mother so badly, yet couldn’t get pregnant. I was in love with Jason and it was my time.
We had our life together and both wanted a baby. We decided to see a fertility doctor. We found out that there were issues. I had PCOS (poly-cystic ovarian syndrome). Besides having a hard time conceiving, I had other symptoms such as: hair loss, hair growth in unwanted areas-face, stomach, irregular periods, and hard time losing weight. Jason had a low sperm count. He had a previous drug issue and the doctor said that was the likely cause. Jason had other children so I figured it was all me. We were working against each other. My doctor wanted me to get tests done and start fertility drugs. I got the testing done and was going to start fertility drugs just as soon as my job was laid off. I had to transfer to another state to stay with the company. Well, my treatment was put on hold to find another location and pack and move. At the same time, Jason had starting using behind my back. The move was much needed and I was glad for a change. Jason had grown up in the area and knew everyone. He is a tattoo artist and some of the crowd that comes with that job like to party a lot. I put my foot down and said he had to get a regular position and start treatment when we got settled.
We picked the worst month to move-November. I had to relocate
Thesis: Experience is the only way a person can truly understand being pregnant.
Intro:
What’s it like having a baby? Is it all glow and perfect happiness? I want to share my pregnancy experience start to finish. I want to share the good, bad, and painful. Experience is the only way a person can truly understand being pregnant. It’s a roller coaster ride the whole way through. Let me tell you about my ride. More to intro
Body 1-finding out-redo some sentences, reword a few things.
I was frustrated and depressed again. I had taken another pregnancy test that was negative. I wanted to be a mother so badly, yet couldn’t get pregnant. I was in love with Jason and it was my time.
We had our life together and both wanted a baby. We decided to see a fertility doctor. We found out that there were issues. I had PCOS (poly-cystic ovarian syndrome). Besides having a hard time conceiving, I had other symptoms such as: hair loss, hair growth in unwanted areas-face, stomach, irregular periods, and hard time losing weight. Jason had a low sperm count. He had a previous drug issue and the doctor said that was the likely cause. Jason had other children so I figured it was all me. We were working against each other. My doctor wanted me to get tests done and start fertility drugs. I got the testing done and was going to start fertility drugs just as soon as my job was laid off. I had to transfer to another state to stay with the company. Well, my treatment was put on hold to find another location and pack and move. At the same time, Jason had starting using behind my back. The move was much needed and I was glad for a change. Jason had grown up in the area and knew everyone. He is a tattoo artist and some of the crowd that comes with that job like to party a lot. I put my foot down and said he had to get a regular position and start treatment when we got settled.
We picked the worst month to move-November. I had to relocate