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Topic One: Federalist Party and the Democratic-Republican Party
Thesis: Although the United States of America has branched away to form their own government system, a group of parties seem to develop over time. The Federalist Party, who is proudly run by Hamilton, and the Democratic-Republican, who is run by Jefferson, both use ways to indulge themselves in making the United States a much better place to live compared to what they use to live under England’s rule.
Paragraph Topics
Paragraph One: Beliefs in the Government
Topic Sentence: Both of the leaders of the parties and their supports saw how to form the government of the United States differently. The Federalists wanting a government in which would help them have control over commerce, tax, declaring war, and making treaties. And then there was the Democrat-Republic who just wanted local control over a national system for the new government.
Supporting Details:
The Federalists wanted a government in which had loose interpretation of the constitution, but overall believed in a strong government.
Due to having a strong government, the Federalist’s had a military policy in which they had a strong time army and navy.
Whereas the Democratic-Republican thought it would be best if the states had the rights and form a weaker central government, but strongly believe that they had a strict interpretation over the Constitution.
As for the Democratic- Republican’s their military policy for their beliefs were to have a small time army and nave, and state militias.
Paragraph Two: Debts and Taxes
Topic Sentence: In a similar fashion the two parties had different ideals when it came to taxation and how to repay debts from previous wars they were elicited in.
Supporting Details:
The Federalists wanted to reimburse any revolutionary war debts that they have, as well as increase tariffs to help promote manufacturing—most applicable toward the northerners due to the fact that it was mostly an
Thesis: Although the United States of America has branched away to form their own government system, a group of parties seem to develop over time. The Federalist Party, who is proudly run by Hamilton, and the Democratic-Republican, who is run by Jefferson, both use ways to indulge themselves in making the United States a much better place to live compared to what they use to live under England’s rule.
Paragraph Topics
Paragraph One: Beliefs in the Government
Topic Sentence: Both of the leaders of the parties and their supports saw how to form the government of the United States differently. The Federalists wanting a government in which would help them have control over commerce, tax, declaring war, and making treaties. And then there was the Democrat-Republic who just wanted local control over a national system for the new government.
Supporting Details:
The Federalists wanted a government in which had loose interpretation of the constitution, but overall believed in a strong government.
Due to having a strong government, the Federalist’s had a military policy in which they had a strong time army and navy.
Whereas the Democratic-Republican thought it would be best if the states had the rights and form a weaker central government, but strongly believe that they had a strict interpretation over the Constitution.
As for the Democratic- Republican’s their military policy for their beliefs were to have a small time army and nave, and state militias.
Paragraph Two: Debts and Taxes
Topic Sentence: In a similar fashion the two parties had different ideals when it came to taxation and how to repay debts from previous wars they were elicited in.
Supporting Details:
The Federalists wanted to reimburse any revolutionary war debts that they have, as well as increase tariffs to help promote manufacturing—most applicable toward the northerners due to the fact that it was mostly an