Pharr West Club Essay

At the Pharr West Club entrance, Marie, nineteen years old, black long straight hair that fell into a V-shape cut in her back, with black pants and pink dressy shirt, stood next to her three best friends. Fernie, Elizabeth, and Johnny, Marie’s best friends, stood anxiously next to her waiting for the club to open. Fernie, eighteen year old boy, with spikey dirt brown hair, dark brown eyes, was admiring his blood red shirt and dark pants. Marie’s nineteen year old friend, Elizabeth, caramel color eyes, in a sparkly blue strapless, mini dress, observed as the evening dimmed out into pure darkness, after waiting one hour for the club to open its doors. Johnny, twenty, the oldest of the group, with hazel eyes and soldier haircut hair, a dark blue shirt and holy pants, was daydreaming of all the girls he would meet at the club. “Marie don’t you think it’s kind of chilly”, inquired Fernie while rubbing his arms with his hands.
“I’m Victoria,” she said in a sweet low voice.
When a song started playing Fernie asked her to dance with him. She excitedly said yes and they twirled into the dance floor. They started talking about the club and how nice it was, and they started talking about other nice things. As Fernie looked into her eyes he could see she was about the same age as he was and he could see his reflection across her hazel color eyes. She had long and extended lashes that almost touched her eyebrow. She looked at him and gave him a timid smile knowing that he was checking her out. As the time went by the club turned colder and Fernie knew it was time for him to go home so he kindly asked her if she would like a she said yes to the ride to her house. Fernie lent her his jacket when they stepped out the club because it was really fresh. As they drove home Fernie saw that she didn’t live so far away from the club and when they got there. He asked her if he could see her some other day she said