Introduction
Get audience attention: Attention all Faulkner State University Students. Commuters are you tired of a long boring drive to Bay Minette to attend your daily classes. On-Campus residents are frustrated with being stuck on campus when you can not drive or get a ride off campus.
Indicate purpose and thesis: Today I plan to unleash a cutting edge three part transportation system that will mobilize the students, faculty and staff of Faulkner State University. I am going to persuade you the students to push the administrators to initialize this transportation system Establish credibility: Crossing the Mobile Bay alone on each class day has given me a lot time to reflect. Once I visited my cousin …show more content…
Secondly I will go over my three part transportation plan. Lastly I will express the benefits of the new transportation initiative.
Body
I. First I am going to go over the current transportation system. A. Today students commute to the university by car or the BRAT system. According to Faulknerstate.edu, Through the Baldwin Rural Area Transportation System (BRATS), students who live in the Baldwin County area can take advantage of free transportation to and from the College B. The BRAT system was designed to bus students from the Baldwin County Area to the University. C. There are several reasons why this system why this system is ineffective. 1. The BRAT system is not widely publicized therefore people know little about the routes. 2. The founders of the BRAT route failed to extend routes to Mobile which makes up most of the commuter population. 3. Overall services are limited with the system they only have certain pick up and drop off times and only run in Baldwin …show more content…
For registration into the carpool system each participant will pay a $5.00 fee per semester. Also drivers and riders will split gas equally between the number of people in the car. 4. Drivers and riders must also undergo a background check, have a good driving record, insurance, parking decal and student ID 5. In November 2005, the United States Environmental Protection Agency issued a hand book on how to implement a carpool in organization. In the future, using this handbook the University can implement more incentives for the students and faculty.
Transition: Now that you have heard my transportation plan lets move on the benefits of my plan. III. There are so many benefits not only to the students, but also to Faulkner State University. G. The expansion of the transportation will improve the quality of life for commuters and on-campus residents. 1. Commuter students will save money on gas, and be able to make friends on the bus. 2. Commuters also will be able to come to school if they suddenly have car trouble. 3. On-Campus residents will also be able to get on and off campus even if they don 't drive or have a car. H. The most important beneficiary will be our