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Persuasive Speech
Alessandro Stipo
November 26, 2011
ENG1DC
Mr. Byrne
Persuasive Speech

Imagine that you trained all your life for that special moment of playing in your first NHL game. At the beginning of your first shift in the game suddenly another player’s stick comes up and strikes you in the eye. This incident ends your career. This could have been prevented if you wore a visor. I think visors should be mandatory in the NHL in order to improve a player’s safety. Statistics have proven players who wear visors in the NHL play less aggressive. There are many incidents involving sticks and pucks going into player’s faces. A recent incident occurred between Philadelphia’s Chris Pronger and Toronto’s Mikhail Grabovski. Furthermore, two years ago a former NHL player Brad May, Gave a speech supporting the use of visors. Visors have been proven to improve a player’s play and helped players become less aggressive. From the 2010-2011 to the 2011-2012 there has been a 10% increase in the amount of players wearing a visor. Players in the NHL are starting to realize how important visors are. Rutgers University did a survey to find out if players played less aggressive when wearing a visor. This survey was conducted after the 2000-2001 season and the University’s theory was correct. According to the study done the average amount of penalty minutes that a player wearing a visor had were 30 penalty minutes while players not wearing a visor had 50 penalty minutes. Wearing visors help prevent horrible face injuries. On October 24th, 2011 the Toronto Maple Leafs were playing the Philadelphia Flyers in a regular season game. Toronto’s Mikhail Grabovski and Philadelphia’s Chris Pronger were involved in a frightening incident. During the first period, Mikhail Grabovski was waiting for his teammate to pass him the puck, He took a shot on net, but the goaltender stopped it. What Mikhail didn’t realize is that on his follow through he nailed Chris Pronger on the corner of



Bibliography: 1. wyshynski, G. W. (2011, October 26). Hockey fighting and the nhl mandatory visor debate. Retrieved from http://sports.yahoo.com/nhl/blog/puck_daddy/post/Hockey-fighting-and-the-NHL-mandatory-visor-deba?urn=nhl-wp15791 2. Campbell, K. C. (2011, November 02). Thn poll: nhl visor usage rises 10 percent from 2010-11. Retrieved from http://www.thehockeynews.com/articles/42725-THN-Poll-NHL-visor-usage-rises-10-percent-from-201011.html 3.

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