Preview

personal response

Satisfactory Essays
Open Document
Open Document
281 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
personal response
Personal response.
Nurzaida Syaza Zawawi
IB 95

I would strongly disagree with the statement “uniforms interfere with students’ freedom of self expression” as I am positive that uniform would somehow trigger students to excel academically. Students are teenagers who tend to be fashion-victims and their desire to be up-to-date with the flow of fashion would never fade away. Hence, they may be less likely to take school seriously as most of them are keen to look good rather than to have fantastic grades. So, wearing uniform would help them to pay more attention on their education rather than on their appearances. Moreover, peer pressure will influence them to ask their low-income earner parents to spend on teenagers’ clothes which could be considered as unnecessary expense. I have friends who believe that various teenagers’ fashions nowadays such as street fashion, urban and even goth are too good to be ignored, thus, they spend so much on clothes just to ensure that they are on par with current trend when they actually couldn’t afford it. I look at this as a waste of money where it could be spent for other essential items rather than to shop on branded Levis jeans and GAP t-shirt. Furthermore, if everyone’s uniform is identical, outsiders can be more readily identified. There are several cases happen at schools in which few intruders manage to get into the school and cause some commotion among the students. What makes thing even worse is that the school board could do nothing to prevent it from happening over and over again. In conclusion, uniformity is not a burden but it is to help students preserving their own identity as knowledge seeker.

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Satisfactory Essays

    The majority of public school students believe uniforms interfere with their first amendment rights. When wearing uniforms, students feel their creativity and ability to express themselves are being affected, when in fact uniforms may curb negative behavior associated with student dressing. This allows the student to focus on school work instead of being distracted by the clothing.…

    • 480 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    People who are against the implementation of school uniforms will argue that they subtract students’ liberty to make decisions and don’t let the wearer feel distinctive and unique. They hamper the necessity for individuality in a student by taking away their sense of…

    • 824 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    None of the schools I have attended had a uniform requirement and many students dressed in ways I found inappropriate. The private school I attended had a strict dress code but public school teachers often overlook the violation of dress code. School uniforms bring a more formal look; giving the school a better reputation and creating a sense of belonging among the students. My style is very diverse and reveals my general interests, whether it be nerdy shirts, girly clothing or vintage outfits from the 40's. Personally, I have always been comfortable in my clothing whether I fit in with others or not. In fact, I always prefer to look different and I have more than enough clothing to express my unique style. I do, however, have friends that always feel under pressure to wear the right clothing and often borrow clothes from me. It is reasons such as these why all schools should require uniforms. School uniforms may be the prominent aspect of our society’s road to success in educating its…

    • 497 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Throughout the years, there has been much debate with schools across the country on whether or not students should be allowed to wear uniforms. Through past experience with this argument, it’s safe to say that wearing a uniform is not a bad thing at all. Why? For one, uniforms stop other students from being judged on how they look, two, they save families money and students will not pressure their parents into buying clothes some families can’t afford, and lastly uniforms increase safety and security. So I do strongly agree that students should be able to wear uniforms.…

    • 567 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    According to the article “The Variable Dresscode: Pros and Cons of School Uniforms” they state that “students are not exposed to diversity and often times experience culture shock when facing individuality in the real world”. We already have school security systems, locks on doors, school police that are there constantly. If we had to wear uniforms then it would feel like more of a jail. Uniforms make everyone the same and then it makes it look like there is no diversity in the school. If uniforms were required no one would be happy because no one wants to be the same as everyone else leading some students to not do good in school. The school wants us to do good in our classes but if everyone is dressed the same and have to follow all the same rules then kids will try more to be different or rebel in other ways. Kids are taught to be individuals and to express themselves freely but when they are told to dress the same and act the same way as everyone else is it takes away their rights express…

    • 995 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    For this reason, uniform keeps students feel equal of their family situation. When students wear the same clothes; they feel in the same page. Clothes can express a lot about people and identify their situation. In addition, they do not have any space for their brain to think about who is poor or rich because everyone wear the same cloth and help to close the gap between students those who is poor and those who is rich. Furthermore, they cannot judge…

    • 737 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    As the first amendment says, everyone has the right to express themselves freely which you cannot do if you are forced to wear a school uniform. (procon.org) Clothing choices are a crucial part of self expression and taking the choice away from someone can result in stifling students creativity. Overall, when kids do not have the choice on what to wear they are unable to express their individuality. Another reason school uniforms should not be required is that they do not have any positive effect on attendance, academics, preparedness, or exam results.…

    • 404 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Cool2

    • 668 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Uniform is an issue that many of our fellow country wide students are facing. Many students don’t want to wear uniform, but others are saying that they are comfortable wearing uniform and that every school should have a type of uniform. There are two sides to this conflict, a pro and the con although there are more pros than cons; the cons usually are a bigger argument.…

    • 668 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    School uniforms do not allow students to express themselves, and schools should not require students to wear them. Self-expression is an important and necessary part of life. Kent J. Fisher wrote, “Our biggest problem with schools uniform policy is the anti-individuality message it sends. If young people are to understand that a cornerstone of our freedom is the primacy of the individual, then…

    • 587 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Students should have the right to be able to wear what they want with some restrictions of course.Some students might argue that school uniforms decrease bullying rate dramatically. This is proven false by many studies. if there are no clothes to bully people over bullies will just find something else like your hair, money, or even less stupid things such as a lie they make up about you (“Pros and cons of school uniforms).…

    • 275 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Even though the argument on whether or not school uniforms takes away the student's right to self-expression will never end. Having school uniforms for the students to wear will eliminate bullies who pick on other students based on their clothing. Uniforms will eliminate the separation of social classes when that is mainly determined by what clothing a person wears. Last but not least, schools that require the students to wear school uniforms makes a formal look on the school. Uniforms may seem boring, but if they are able to help improve learning for students, they are a very reasonable…

    • 554 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Not very many schools around the United States make their students wear uniforms. According to the U.S. Department of Education, National Center for Education Statistics, during the 2013-14 school year only fifteen percent of schools required their students to wear uniforms. Some people believe that the use of uniforms will help decrease the amount of bullying and crime in schools. They also believe that by wearing uniforms, students will focus more on their school work instead of their clothes. On the other hand, I believe that the use of school uniforms limits a student's freedom to express themselves. Also, I believe school uniforms don’t help the amount of bullying, it could even make it worse if someone can’t afford a uniform. Lastly,…

    • 872 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Anti Dress Code

    • 603 Words
    • 3 Pages

    School is also the place where the next actors, writers, artists, politicians, inventors, designers and musicians are trained. School uniforms send a clear early-life message to students that conformity is important and creativity is not, that authority is allowed to abuse it's power and constrain our constitutional right to free speech and expression. Students learn from uniforms that their individuality, political opinions and religious rights are unimportant, as is their education: students are regularly suspended for non compliance to the uniform code even if their school work is excellent. If uniform-requiring schools were actually in 'the business of learning' this would not occur.…

    • 603 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Opposing School Uniforms

    • 939 Words
    • 4 Pages

    However, as stated previously, school is a place to learn not, not to show off your clothing line and your personal swagger. Clothes don’t pick who you are, wearing the uniforms will show that they are all equal and that no one is better than the other one. So, I believe that wearing the uniforms will beneficial to the school, students and parents. Society must decide if individual expression through clothing is more important than education performance being improved because of uniforms being implemented into the school system. Parents and students should remember that uniforms may be required during school hours. After school students can express their individuality in a way, they dress outside of the…

    • 939 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    In “An Argument Against School Uniforms” Dr. Alan Hilfer, senior psychologist in Brooklyn’s Children’s and Adolescent Unit at Maimonides Medical Centre, argues that clothes are a source of expression for students, and as children get older, they become increasingly resentful of uniforms… By instituting a uniform policy; schools are taking away a student’s individuality through their attire (2013). In essence, when students are required to wear uniforms they feel as though they are hindered from showing a part of their personality through the way they dress. For instance, they may want to depict their feelings on a particular day by wearing an outfit which they feel will assist them in doing so. For this reason, opponents argue that wearing uniforms to college has no psychological effect on students. Therefore, students who oppose the idea of wearing uniform feels that they are being deprived of expressing themselves through their casual…

    • 920 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays