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Personal Narrative: The Spreading Disease
The Spreading Disease One cold night in New York my mom had a really bad fever. She was coughing up blood and she was throwing up every ten minutes. Her skin was getting black dots. My sister and I were trying everything to help her out. The next day she was even worse. She had skin falling off and she was burning like she was in lava. We went to go get some medicine for her and when we came back she had lumps on her face. We thought she got beat by someone but she did not. We gave her medicine and we went to bed. The next day my mom seem to be better but when we went outside people were going crazy. They were stripping off their clothes and they had lumps on their cheeks.
After a week my sister and I went to go get food. People were dying
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She has dots and she is super red and sweaty. So we drove to find a hospital But as we got there my sister died so it was just me. The youngest one out of everybody that was in my family. I didn’t know what to do now. I was only thinking about death. I was thinking that why can’t I die first. I got so mad I screamed so loud that I made a window crack. I was punching anything I saw. I even punched the ground. I made my hand bleed. But I was so mad that why can’t I be the first one to go. Why couldn’t I be dead when my sister died. I don’t know what to do know. All I know now that i’m alone. That I might be the only one on earth. But then I thought that i’m not the only one on earth. I can’t be the only one earth. So I drove thinking this disease can’t kill the whole world. So I found a place that is pretty decent. So I went inside of it and out of nowhere a person came out of a room. It was a girl and she had a gun. She had it on my head as she was asking me who am I and where am I from. I told her that i’m from New York. But I did not tell her my name. She put the gun down and I asked her what is she doing here. She said,”I’m here because my family died and know i’m alone.” I told her that my family died and I asked if she has another gun I can use. She said she did and she gave me the gun. But then a man that was dying was running and pushed the girl out a window. So then I was alone again and I just waited for someone to find

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