Freshman Composition has done so much for me academically. In previous years I have had to do little to no writing and even when we did there were no rules or writing process we had to follow. This class has built a great basis for me, towards my academic future. I do realize that I am far away from being even an average writer, but I enjoy and accept that challenge to myself on becoming a competent writer. Parts of my writing, that still need to work are my introductions and sentence fluency. While I believe that my strong suits are, that once I get past my obstacles of writing that I have the potential to write something that will make a difference, other than that all my skills are still very raw. I’ve learned many things during EN101, the…
I approached this semester with dread. Most of my life I have made a conscious effort to avoid writing classes at all costs. Not for lack of ability, rather a lack of interest. Thus was my mentality entering into my semester of English Composition.…
My experience with college essay writing began in my first semester, this semester, of English 1157. Many people may think that a personal…
In the past, I was always afraid to write essays because I knew I was not capable enough to write a decent essay. However, now that I have taken both ENG 101E and 101F I feel more confident in my writing skills. During this experience, I have learned how to write better by including my own ideas and also including more detail in my writing. By taking ENG 101E, I already felt more confident with my writing, but now that it is the end of ENG 101F I think I have improved even more.…
Am I ready for college? I guess that was never a question I really thought about. I knew that all throughout high school I was going to go into college. But the question is, am I ready for it? Has high school prepared me for college? Had every paper I have written been building block to success for college writing? Though school I have written papers based off of research, and personal opinions. I have been an A student for as long as I can remember. I have gotten A's and B's on almost all papers I have handed in. As a kid I was very passionate about writing; me and my brothers would sit and collaborate on story's that we have made up and wrote on paper. We enjoyed to sit and pick at one another's story's till they were perfect. But that love soon turned into disgust. I was only writing because I was forced to. So many essays I handed in were sloppy, and unorganized. I learned that writing was beginning to be something that I did for a…
In Composition 2, taught by Professor Milka Mosley, you will be reading a lot of unique essays that will inspire you to write unique essays of your own. You will find various writing styles that will hopefully benefit the advancement of your own writing style. Out of all the essays that I have read thus far, the work that has affected me the most was “Learning About work from Joe Cool” by Atkin.…
Imagine a class where one can have fun and learn a much needed skill--that class is English Composition I. I have met my goal of becoming a better writer during this class. I did it by evaluating myself and learning from my mistakes. During my time in English Composition I, I have improved my writing through the advertisement analysis, the comparative analysis, plus the narrative, and the argumentative essays.…
What has probably been the most impactful in my writing would be the collaborative writing process. While criticism may destroy my self-esteem it has helped quiet an enormous bit my in writing. Before, I would rarely let people revise my work because of how they would diminish the essay I worked so hard for. Now, I freely ask people to check my work, mostly because of how I miss simple mistakes. This method of writing has opened me to new ideas that I have never thought of before. A huge problem that I never noticed was all the syntax that I did. Collaborative writing has probably been the best gift that I have received from this dual course that I am…
My experience as a writer started in high school. I took a drama class in this class you learned how to act and how to write plays, a real writing experience. In nursing school I had to do a lot of writing. While I was studying in college most of my course work required writing a lot of essays. My other writing experience include writing poetry. I have written poetry and published it. I also have written and published several poetry books. My next writing experience is with a former record recording company. I have written four songs for this company and currently hold the sheet music. My other writing experience is writing children’s books. I have written and published five children’s books. I have completed several creative writing…
I have always been raised by a single parent, and while I have continuously received the necessities for school and life in general, luxurious items were not seen as important as the things we needed. My mom has always taught me and my brother the concept of things I want versus things I need, and I have always admired how hard my mother works to provide for me and my brother with love and support for our lives. This scholarship opportunity would greatly take some burden off of my mother. The financial support that college requires is extensive and has always been on my mind throughout my senior year. My college decision could possibly be a decision between the more frugal option and the college that makes me happy. My mom has always told me to go to the…
Hey, I’m Ava I am 15 years old and I go to Wood Creek High School. I have a pretty normal life, my parents and I live on Eastwood Drive, and I don’t know what else to write because my parents are making me write this. My mother thinks it is going to be a good for me to start writing in here because my therapist thinks I’m “depressed”, I’m pretty sure that my therapist just wants to make more money so she is saying I’m depressed so my mothers sends me back.…
During my senior year I took College writing where every week we had a different type of essay every week. I got to where I loved writing essays. We wrote many different types of essays. There was some that I liked doing and that really caught my attention. Some of them were kind of hard to start and got a little confusing, but by the time I got into writing them they weren’t too bad.…
My love for writing is similar to my love of swimming. I put all my love and sweat into writing as well as into swimming back and forth down the lanes in the pool. Some days, I feel like a fish swishing through the water, while other days I feel like a dense blob that is about to drown. However, no matter how productive my swim or writing is, when I get out of the pool, I am physically at the same place as I started and I feel that I have not made much progress. However, once I look back at my work, I see how much stronger I have become and the skills and techniques I have developed.…
Now I have completed my first college essay. I have learned that college writing is definitely not as simple as it seems. In college writing, you have the freedom to expand your thoughts on paper without having to follow the five paragraph formula. Moreover, I have identified my strengths and weaknesses as a writer. My strengths are vocabulary, sentence structure, and opening with an interesting introduction. Also, I do not lose focus on the topic at hand and explain my points in details through the essay. On the other hand, my weaknesses are not writing concise and precise sentences and organizing my paper. However, I have obtained strategies that will turn my weaknesses to strengths. One strategy is revising. I usually do not take the time…
The main point of my personal narrative essay is that pressure in college is positive, as it prepares you for the challenges that you will face in the future. I attempted to appeal to ethos by letting the reader know I am a college student and have been shaped by these pressures myself. I also, tried appealing to pathos by sharing the tragic story of my friends parents in my essay. Finally, I introduced my essay with a quirky science fact that in a way appealed to logos. The most challenging part for me during the revision process was trying to make deeper connections between my supporting paragraphs. I found myself wasting a lot of time thinking, trying to figure out the best way to get my point across. I struggled with finding the medium…