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Personal Narrative: Last Person Swimming
I frantically went down to lane 4 for my 400 IM relay. I had a lot of pressure on me because I am the last person swimming. Pressure to score points for my team weighed heavy on my mind. Little butterflies in my stomach tried to tell me that I was afraid. Stepping onto the block, I anxiously waited for my teammate to touch the wall.

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