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Personal Narrative: Drowning
My life has been turned around since that day when I felt like I drowned
I have seen the down side of life
And I feel like I need to fly some of these days
I wonder why I had to stay

I feel like I don't have a name
I had friends but no one would stay
I wish that I could fly away into the sky
I need someone to tell me to stay here
But I also feel as if I disappear

I would like to be free
From this curse thats found me
I have nothing to say to you
That’s worth you’re while too
I need someone who cares
But all around me are empty chairs

If someone would talk with me
If someone would walk with me
If someone would stay with me
I would finally be happy
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