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Another contraction wracked my body, with a gush of liquid following. The unbearable pain I was experiencing and the urge to push grew stronger! As I was pulled onto the hospital bed the pain was excruciating and the paramedics rushed me into a delivery room.
“Rosie, it’s time to push. When the next contraction hits, you are going to have to make the most of it,” the doctor informed me but all I could do was nod.
“One’s coming!” I screamed as the pain surged through my body. I found myself pushing so hard that I saw stars, and within moments another contraction came, sending a shooting pain through my body. I felt something shift and I urgently wanted to push again, she was moving down.
“Hold it Rosie, wait
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“Not much, I was just taking a late night walk for some fresh air after studying, and I’m assuming you just finished work.” Yep he got that one right, I suppose I would have wanted a walk in the crisp night air if I had been studying for my High School Certificate exams, they seemed intense. After a few moments I was almost home and wanted to ditch him and go inside.
“Well this is me then, I’ll see you at school tomorrow,” I tried to politely leave the conversation.
“Ok well nice talking. Oh and Rosie, are your parents home because there are no cars in the driveway?”
“I guess they aren’t here, they said they may be late home after work. Bye,” I started to head inside when I felt as if I wasn’t alone. Turning around I realised that Jerrod was behind me. I wasn’t sure what I was meant to do or say.
“Jerrod, what are you doing?” I stated plainly hoping he would get the message to leave.
“Obviously coming in, what did you think I was doing?” he sneered, looking happy with himself.
“No, you’re not! I’m going to bed and my parents aren’t here!” Panic began somewhere deep within my soul, my body erupted with an uncontrollable shake. He wasn’t going to… was

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