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Personal Narrative: Aneurysm
It was a warm summer night of june in 2014 earlier that day I was a squelching hot 100 above that day.And I was heading to bed and so when I got to my bed I started to read “The Hunger Games” by suzanne collins page by page.And also read every piece of black ink on the page for about 20 some minutes.But then as I was slowly falling into a dark void called sleep i hear the home phone ring.
I decided that I shouldn't answer the phone since I should be going to bed at that time of night.So I decide to fall back into the void but just as I do so i hear my mom walk down the hallway I knew so was going to answer the phone so I sit up in my bed.But just a few minutes later i hear her start to cry I think what happend so I get out of bed and
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“What is an aneurysm mom” I said panicky because I don't know what that is. It’s an excessive localized enlargement of an artery caused by a weakening of the artery wall”. Then I realized that that was a bad thing she also said “get some clothes packed in you bag”.Then my dad came rushing into the room and asked what had happened.he learned what had happened and said “ ben go get some clothes and wake you brother up now”.
Later that week about three days later after my dad picked my brother and I up from my grandma's house and took us home.So when i got home my dad told me he wanted he wanted to see me in his room.I thought i was in trouble but when i got in thier he said “ben you grandma has died”.Then suddenly my world began to fall in to a dark pit of saddness and sorrow.It was if i had my life end thier and then only i was still alive at the time being.
And he also said to me “Ben it’s ok to let anyone you love go”.”But i knew her the out out of anyone i know”!Then the last thing i remember was that i started to cry for the next 3-4 hours straight. But then i remember waking up in my bed later that day and my mom was sitting right next to me and said” ben do you know”?
And i

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