Personal Finance
Thesis statement: why revitalization taking so long and the impact that this revitalization process affect the resident in clinton hill.
(Topic sentence and main idea)2nd reasons: the government policy hirachi process
2nd evidence:
“It is ironic that after fighting disinvestment and seeking to encourage reinvestment for more than 20 years the revitalization value that PACC was trying to protect – is seriously threatened.”1
“Plans for a pedestrian plaza on Myrtle Avenue have been pushed back until summer due to glitches in the bidding process. …. This isn’t the first hold up, which was championed by the Myrtle Avenue Brooklyn Partnership.”
“The public art component of the plaza was held up by Public Design Commision approval, according to Brownstoner.”2
“has long been delayed even before 2013, from above said will be done by agust 2013 and push again till next year 2015 summer.
“Myrtle Minutes reported that construction will begin this summer and will last for more than a year.”3 (which they have mention will be finished only 2015)
“Alex Barrett, a real-estate developer, unveiled his company’s first construction –fence mural, at 4 and 8 Downing Street in the Clinton Hill neighborhood of Brooklyn. ( server and a documentary “Dave Chappelle’s Block Party,” from 2005.) a mural that related the building history.”4He did get approved and he feel suck a good thing why should go thru such inconvient process.
3rd reason: bad news
3rd evidence:
“It is important to note that a substantial minority -23 percent –of Clinton Hill’s population in 1950 was black, having increased 37 percent over 1940. Although the black population as a whole appeared to have a lower socioeconomic status than all Clinton Hill residents, the proportion of black was not substantially less than that for Brooklyn as a whole. More important, black households were more likely than white Clinton Hill residents to won their dwelling in 1950.”5
“ A final factor that may
(Topic sentence and main idea)2nd reasons: the government policy hirachi process
2nd evidence:
“It is ironic that after fighting disinvestment and seeking to encourage reinvestment for more than 20 years the revitalization value that PACC was trying to protect – is seriously threatened.”1
“Plans for a pedestrian plaza on Myrtle Avenue have been pushed back until summer due to glitches in the bidding process. …. This isn’t the first hold up, which was championed by the Myrtle Avenue Brooklyn Partnership.”
“The public art component of the plaza was held up by Public Design Commision approval, according to Brownstoner.”2
“has long been delayed even before 2013, from above said will be done by agust 2013 and push again till next year 2015 summer.
“Myrtle Minutes reported that construction will begin this summer and will last for more than a year.”3 (which they have mention will be finished only 2015)
“Alex Barrett, a real-estate developer, unveiled his company’s first construction –fence mural, at 4 and 8 Downing Street in the Clinton Hill neighborhood of Brooklyn. ( server and a documentary “Dave Chappelle’s Block Party,” from 2005.) a mural that related the building history.”4He did get approved and he feel suck a good thing why should go thru such inconvient process.
3rd reason: bad news
3rd evidence:
“It is important to note that a substantial minority -23 percent –of Clinton Hill’s population in 1950 was black, having increased 37 percent over 1940. Although the black population as a whole appeared to have a lower socioeconomic status than all Clinton Hill residents, the proportion of black was not substantially less than that for Brooklyn as a whole. More important, black households were more likely than white Clinton Hill residents to won their dwelling in 1950.”5
“ A final factor that may