Personal Essay 
Personal Essay Rewrite
For most of my life, family and God have been the two things I value the most. As I've grown up, I have begun to value my friends who have been there for me through it all, the money that I work hard for and also the education that will get me where I want to be in life. As I started to figure out my strength and weakness, I realized my strength is what makes me who I am today. As for my weakness, they motivate me to be a better person than I already am. In high school I decided I wanted to become a labor and delivery nurse.
The PAP test shows that my score is ESFP which means I'm the performer. It said I'm easygoing, good at communication, and that I don't enjoy working alone. All of those are true because I get along with anyone and everyone and I would rather work in a group than be by myself. The test said my possible careers are nurse, photographer, social events coordinator and also retail sales. Those are all jobs I have considered going into because I felt like they would fit best with who I am. The Typefocus test said my personality type is ENFP, which is not very different than my PAP test. This test said I'm the inspirer which means I'm creative and can easily find success in activities and projects that interest me and I'm also good at motivating others. It said that I don't like routines, and that's very true because I always like to find new ways to do things, but at the same time I don't mind doing the same thing over and over a couple of times. My possible careers according to this test are actor, teacher, artist, and trainer. Those are also the careers I was looking into as I started to grow up. These two tests are not very different from each other and they also are both correct on my personality. I have always wanted to be so many things in life and still do today. I wanted to do so much that I don't think I can live long enough to become all the things I want to become.
On my Multiple Intelligences Survey, my top score
For most of my life, family and God have been the two things I value the most. As I've grown up, I have begun to value my friends who have been there for me through it all, the money that I work hard for and also the education that will get me where I want to be in life. As I started to figure out my strength and weakness, I realized my strength is what makes me who I am today. As for my weakness, they motivate me to be a better person than I already am. In high school I decided I wanted to become a labor and delivery nurse.
The PAP test shows that my score is ESFP which means I'm the performer. It said I'm easygoing, good at communication, and that I don't enjoy working alone. All of those are true because I get along with anyone and everyone and I would rather work in a group than be by myself. The test said my possible careers are nurse, photographer, social events coordinator and also retail sales. Those are all jobs I have considered going into because I felt like they would fit best with who I am. The Typefocus test said my personality type is ENFP, which is not very different than my PAP test. This test said I'm the inspirer which means I'm creative and can easily find success in activities and projects that interest me and I'm also good at motivating others. It said that I don't like routines, and that's very true because I always like to find new ways to do things, but at the same time I don't mind doing the same thing over and over a couple of times. My possible careers according to this test are actor, teacher, artist, and trainer. Those are also the careers I was looking into as I started to grow up. These two tests are not very different from each other and they also are both correct on my personality. I have always wanted to be so many things in life and still do today. I wanted to do so much that I don't think I can live long enough to become all the things I want to become.
On my Multiple Intelligences Survey, my top score