Peer Review Essay 'Self-Evaluation'

Peer Review Summary/ Self-Evaluation

The student composed a clear and focused essay. The introduction was focused on the idea that everyone has a writer inside, and the possibility that it’s due to how events in our lives affect us. The author proposes that one can possibly decipher memories into words. This essay was well organized with an arrangement of memories of a dreadful event, for example “The last memory of my father, who was like a hero in my eyes, was of him lying peacefully in a place that was strangely unfamiliar to me. I remember writing about how I was bewildered about why he would sleep there that night. I returned home with the undying patience of a soul longing