Paper Strengths And Weaknesses

One of the main strengths I had going into this paper was the background knowledge I had on the subject. For better or for worse, I have learned how to deal with death on many levels. Although it is something that you can never get used to, it is something, however, that I have dealt with in a better way. Another strength to my paper would be the use of my sources. I felt as if they fit properly, and were worded correctly. A weakness that I feel my paper suffers from is the use of preachy-ness. I feel as though I am doing more preaching than explaining, but at the same time, I was just trying to give advice on how I do things. Another weakness that I believe my paper has is the transitions between paragraphs from biological death to psychological