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Paintball Gun-Personal Narrative
During the summer of 2012 in Brooklyn New York, my aunt and uncles made plans to go paintball shooting ,I was so excited! My cousins, my aunt’s friends, my uncles, my dad, my brother, and my sister came. I have 1.1 million cousins on my dad’s side and about half of them came. So when the day came and my friends and family were there, the man in charge gave us a helmet, gloves, a paintball gun, and a bag of paintballs to fill the gun with . My brother and my uncle’s also bought camo gear. My family was split into two groups, the blue and the green. I ended up on the green team and so were my parents. The rules were if you got shot then you were out, and if you shot one of your teammates you were out and that teammate were out as well. As soon as I walked in I was amazed. The playing grounds looked like a forest, they had trees, big pieces of wood and metal to hide behind. There was also had big rocks and a bunch of leaves. My team …show more content…
“I’m sorry , it was an accident.” Then the game started and my mom would not let me play the game by myself. “Stay with me Jaidyn!” my mom said. “Why? I want to play with everyone else”. I said “No! stay with me”. So I stayed and later on in the game my dad walks over to me. He said “Half the team is out, we could win this”. My brother was so into the game that he got about 4 people out of the game. I tried to get him out but I missed. He knew I shot at him but before he could shoot back I ran. I felt like flash missing that paint ball. But soon enough my cousin got him out with a blind shot. Long story short we WON!!!! Then we got in the car to go home and clean up. My father says “Shanelle made plans for us to go to dinner, do you want to come?” I didn’t know my mom was mad until she said,”Jaidyn and I are not coming so you can just take us home”.

I I never really thought about the situation on till now. My mom was so angry.All I thought was what happened ? But I was to young to

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