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CENTRE FOR LANGUAGE
ADVANCED ENGLISH 1
CEL 2233
‘ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY: EXTRA
CO-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES CAUSE STUDENT TO NEGLECT THEIR RESPONSIBILITIES’
Name: Nabilah Bt Nor Asikin
Matric Number: DCE 121129
Section Number: 6
Name Of The Lecturer: Miss Hanim Bt Mohammad Ismail.
Topic : Extra Co-Curricular Activities Cause Students To Neglect Their Academic Responsibilities.
General Statement: In era globalization, the Minister of Education in Malaysia has emphasized that students must participate in extra co-curricular activities to help students who are weak in academics.
Thesis Statement: These are the three reasons to disagree that extra co-curricular activities cause students neglect to their academic responsibilities.
Topic Sentence 1: Firstly, extra co-curricular activities cause students neglect to their academic responsibilities because student do not know how to divide their time.
Supporting Details: • they do not know how to divide time with family • extra classes • and their activities co-curricular.
Topic Sentence 2: Limitation is one of the reasons why extra co-curricular activities make students neglect to their academic responsibilities.
Supporting Details: • limitation in study • limitation in joining activity club • limitation in join activity outdoor
Topic Sentence 3: The final reason to disagree that student prohibitively busy with school activities co-curricular until they neglect their academic responsibilities.
Supporting Details: • because not have time to focus study • because the environment such as their have big family • because too much work at home a lot to help
Rebut: Despite the disadvantage of extra co-curricular activities cause student neglect their academic responsibilities some people argue that because people think that student just waste their time when their join that.
Counter Argument: It
CENTRE FOR LANGUAGE
ADVANCED ENGLISH 1
CEL 2233
‘ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY: EXTRA
CO-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES CAUSE STUDENT TO NEGLECT THEIR RESPONSIBILITIES’
Name: Nabilah Bt Nor Asikin
Matric Number: DCE 121129
Section Number: 6
Name Of The Lecturer: Miss Hanim Bt Mohammad Ismail.
Topic : Extra Co-Curricular Activities Cause Students To Neglect Their Academic Responsibilities.
General Statement: In era globalization, the Minister of Education in Malaysia has emphasized that students must participate in extra co-curricular activities to help students who are weak in academics.
Thesis Statement: These are the three reasons to disagree that extra co-curricular activities cause students neglect to their academic responsibilities.
Topic Sentence 1: Firstly, extra co-curricular activities cause students neglect to their academic responsibilities because student do not know how to divide their time.
Supporting Details: • they do not know how to divide time with family • extra classes • and their activities co-curricular.
Topic Sentence 2: Limitation is one of the reasons why extra co-curricular activities make students neglect to their academic responsibilities.
Supporting Details: • limitation in study • limitation in joining activity club • limitation in join activity outdoor
Topic Sentence 3: The final reason to disagree that student prohibitively busy with school activities co-curricular until they neglect their academic responsibilities.
Supporting Details: • because not have time to focus study • because the environment such as their have big family • because too much work at home a lot to help
Rebut: Despite the disadvantage of extra co-curricular activities cause student neglect their academic responsibilities some people argue that because people think that student just waste their time when their join that.
Counter Argument: It
References: http://www.guardian.co.uk/higher-education-network/blog/2013/jan/22/student-development-university-curriculum-design http://www.infonomics-society.org/IJeLS/The%20Significance%20of%20Student%20Teachers.pdf