Outline and Paragraph Writing examples
NAME : Citra Hardiyanti Ningrum
NIM : 132084022
SUBJECT : Paragraph Writing B
REVISION
Outline 1:
The stolen case in the boarding houses in Lidah Wetan that recently happens are mostly caused by two major factors.
a. Human errors.
1. By the room’s owner.
2. By the roommate.
3. By the room’s neighbors.
b. The building’s condition.
1. There is no any CCTV or safety alarm.
2. The window is easy to open.
3. The key’s locket on the door is easy to be sabotaged.
We can see that human errors and the condition of the boarding house building are the very reasons of the stolen case in Lidah Wetan.
Outline 2:
Reading English novels has many benefits, for example to improve your English skill in three important things.
a. Add your vocabulary.
b. Add your knowledge about English speaking country’s culture.
c. Help you to understand grammar.
Thus, by reading English novels, we can add our vocabulary, know more about English speaking country’s culture, and more understand about grammar.
Outline 3:
The development of cell phone can be easily observed in the development of its size and capability.
a. The development of cell phone’s size.
1. In the past.
2. Nowadays.
b. The development of cell phone’s capability.
1. In the past.
2. Nowadays.
In summary, observing the development of cell phone’s size and capability can show us that there has been a huge development in cell phone.
Outline 4:
There are several changes in my senior high school building after my graduation, especially in the hall, the teacher’s room, and the cafeteria.
a. The hall.
b. The teacher’s room.
c. The cafeteria.
It is clear that the hall, the teacher’s room, and the cafeteria of my Senior High School have changed after my graduation.
Outline 5:
It has been oftenly proven that doing relaxation, go shopping, and entertaining yourself can help your bad mood.
a. Doing relaxation.
1. Sleeping.
2. Getting some massage.
3. Doing yoga.
b. Go shopping.
1. With or
NIM : 132084022
SUBJECT : Paragraph Writing B
REVISION
Outline 1:
The stolen case in the boarding houses in Lidah Wetan that recently happens are mostly caused by two major factors.
a. Human errors.
1. By the room’s owner.
2. By the roommate.
3. By the room’s neighbors.
b. The building’s condition.
1. There is no any CCTV or safety alarm.
2. The window is easy to open.
3. The key’s locket on the door is easy to be sabotaged.
We can see that human errors and the condition of the boarding house building are the very reasons of the stolen case in Lidah Wetan.
Outline 2:
Reading English novels has many benefits, for example to improve your English skill in three important things.
a. Add your vocabulary.
b. Add your knowledge about English speaking country’s culture.
c. Help you to understand grammar.
Thus, by reading English novels, we can add our vocabulary, know more about English speaking country’s culture, and more understand about grammar.
Outline 3:
The development of cell phone can be easily observed in the development of its size and capability.
a. The development of cell phone’s size.
1. In the past.
2. Nowadays.
b. The development of cell phone’s capability.
1. In the past.
2. Nowadays.
In summary, observing the development of cell phone’s size and capability can show us that there has been a huge development in cell phone.
Outline 4:
There are several changes in my senior high school building after my graduation, especially in the hall, the teacher’s room, and the cafeteria.
a. The hall.
b. The teacher’s room.
c. The cafeteria.
It is clear that the hall, the teacher’s room, and the cafeteria of my Senior High School have changed after my graduation.
Outline 5:
It has been oftenly proven that doing relaxation, go shopping, and entertaining yourself can help your bad mood.
a. Doing relaxation.
1. Sleeping.
2. Getting some massage.
3. Doing yoga.
b. Go shopping.
1. With or