The topic sentence is clear in this paragraph but is missing information. I expected to be reading about Vancity’s launch of Fair and Fast and that is what is included; detailed information was given to expand on what is Fair and Fast and how it operates. I do think that topic sentence should have included talking about low-income needs in order for me to anticipate the information included in the paragraph where Jerry Buckland is quoted and his experiences and expertise is quoted to support the need for small short-term bank loans that available to more people. I would have it read: In June 2014, Vancity launched Fair and Fast, offering sums between $100 and $1,500, addressing a need to serve low-income Canadians. By including the key points…
This theme is common for writers from that part of the world because the characters in the stories have diversified disagreements about morals, religion, and beliefs on where women belong in society socially. Disagreeing on these topics can conclude in a better perception about other ways of life and learning from the other person, or, it can just turn into a conflict between the two people. The people from that part of the world could just be curious and curtained from outside cultures and…
The two advantages of dehorning cattle to farmer is it makes animals easier to handle and it increases farmer’s profit.…
During the discussion on Washington Week, Gwen Ifil and her colleagues focused on Donald Trump, Marco Rubio, and Ted Cruz. The Republicans had their last debate before Super Tuesday and both Marco Rubio and Ted Cruz just attacked Donald Trump. This time Donald Trump couldn't seem to defend himself, but have no fear, Chris Christie is here. Chris Christie gladly gave an endorsement to Donald Trump to help him bounce back from the shakey debate. John Harwood thought you can't get anymore mainstream than the governor of New Jersey. Gwen Ifill responded with "Endorsements don't do much," but because both Trump and Christie like the spotlight they are a perfect match. As Super Tuesday started approaching, the candidates started doing their best…
There are many different sides to the argument about how the universe was created; one of the most prominent of these arguments is the Teleological argument, also known as the argument from design. The argument from design is based around the idea that the universe is too complex to have just appeared. William Paley uses a wrist watch as an example to describe this idea in more depth. Although there are many other idea that attempt to prove that there is not a creator, such as Darwin’s theory of evolution, the Teleological argument makes a very strong argument towards the existence of a God. The teleological argument has a very strong argument when discussing the existence of a creator due to its design argument about the complexity of the universe.…
Through out Middle East the lives of women appear to have no influencing role in society. Elizabeth Fernea provides an survey of the traditions of an Iraqi village in her book Guests of the Sheik. Within this book, Fernea explores the element of gender and its impact on the roles of women in Iraq, directly in the village of El Nahra. She also encounters the expectations based on the gender-specific social constructs of polygamous families. Another woman author, Leila Abouzeid, explores similar elements in the work Return to Childhood, which is based in islamic Morocco. Fernea, who the women of the harem call Beeja, presents experiential information about the life of both women and men and her role within her husband's life as it reflects upon this eastern culture. This provides for an interesting perspective about the different roles of men and women in distant eastern cultures. Abouzeid also comments on family structure from the eyes of a child and how she viewed the role of the woman also within the eastern culture.…
Rashwan’s subject is how the internet social networks impact the Egyptian Revolution. His purpose is to inform us of how technology is the greatest democracy.…
I agree with the argument because you can be more social without a computer or phone. Jorge Cruz said in paragraph 5, “I think it’s important to face other people and speak up for yourself” I can agree with that because i don't have a phone but i do have a computer which i don't go on every day but i still make friend out of school. but if you on your computer or phone all day then you don't go outside and you don't make new friends and to have a real friend is to meet them face to face. You also can't have a girlfriend. In paragraph 4 Jorge Cruz said;”One over my friends was even involved in a relationship with a girl from another country, whom he met through the internet and never seen in person” I also agree with that because one of them…
Evidence there was grease on a gargoyle that Carly was building that had her fingerprint on it. When they got a piece of stone from the gargoyle it was fake so they newsome one was playing as a gargoyle. To add gargoyle’s don't mess up their building they protect it and that gargoyle was destroying the building.…
The State of Texas is known for their strict rules on voting rights for convicts these including those who are currently incarcerated and those individuals who are released, but on parole. However, ex-offenders who have completed their probation and parole regain their voting rights but would have to re-register. I believe the voting rights for prisoners and ex-convicts should be reformed and changed in the State of Texas. The reason I stand by this is because they’re still citizens of the United States of America.…
Everything is an Argument is a chapter dedicated in informing the reader that nearly every statement can be made into an argument. It begins with explaining the purpose of an argument; it clarifies that not every argument is about winning, rather it is about making a point. The take away of the point is solely up to the reader. It than goes on suggesting that arguments are meant to inform. These arguments are merely meant to inform the reader of something. Other examples are arguments to convince, explore, to make decisions, and to meditate/pray.…
I am working on the cognitive distortion worksheet and is going well with the first three questions, but the last questions “How will you avoid using this cognitive distortion in the persuasive essay you are writing for this class?” I’m having a hard time trying to placed the cognitive distortion I picked into my persuasive essay. Do you have any tips? Another thing, is it me or most of the cognitive distortions a similar to each other? So far I have Global Labeling, Catastrophizing and Overgeneralization.…
“And because I am a woman I have never had the courage to lift my hand.” The repeated nature of ‘I am’ appear as though Firdaus, a typical Arabian women, is in no virtue in acclaiming the power and the status of that of men’s. The repeated triplets, “only my make-up, my hair and my expensive shoes were ‘upper class’” further accentuates the extent in which a stereotypical Arabian woman yearn for the highly valued facets in life, respect and courtesy. The reference to superficial physical features further underlines the uncivilized and primitive society. The constant reference to the androgynous physique such as ‘eyes’, ‘lip’ and ‘hair’ carries the purpose of highlighting the shared features of both genders, thus reiterating women’s lust for gaining the equal superiority and authority as men in society. The prevailing theme of impartiality combined with the regurgitations of superlatives, ‘most expensive’ and ‘best’, act as a flowing commentary in criticizing a typical political situation of an Arabian…
More Than a Veil A Feminist Readings of Marjane Satrapi’s Persepolis Cultural differences have been on the foreground of the ongoing struggle between the United States and Iran since the 1970’s. Stereotypes are built on misunderstandings which can prove costly in international relationships. Our national media coverage of Iran portrays radical Islamic men oppressing their female counterparts. Many American citizens have narrow opinions on Iranian women, most of them dealing with the infamous veil that Islamic girls wear females. Marjane Satrapi in her biographical novel Persepolis examines Iranian women’s roles in the Islamic Revolution, breaks the myth of the oppressing veil, and demonstrates how Iranian boys and girls are socially constructed. Satrapi does all of this with a nontraditional writing style as she challenges the more common coming of manhood tale called a Bildungsroman (Barry p.129) with her own coming of womanhood narrative. In America it is widely believed that women in Iran are to be seen and not heard. That Iran is controlled by an extreme patriarchy where women voice no opinions on social issues. However, we see in Persepolis that Marjane comes from a family with strong women like her mother and grandmother. Her mother routinely takes part in protesting alongside her husband in the streets of Tehran.(Satrapi p.18) Marjane’s mother is an example of the misconception that women in Iran are subjects. Marjane’s mother illustrates to us how women all across Iran were active during the Islamic Revolution, as protestors, collaborators, or victims. (Botshon p.5) Agency is not just shown in adult women in Persepolis but also in adolescent girls.…
Should we do more to deal with the problem of domestic violence, or is the problem exaggerated?…