We would normally seek additional funding; however, we cannot since the rates have increased.
We can barely borrow money for a period of 90 or few days.
We might seek a loan in the amount of $50,000 if our sales increase in a gradual manner
Despite the fact that we have had no response to our bid, we are still available in the event to proceed your building project.
Revise the following sentences to eliminate long lead-ins.
Parking permits are available in the office.
Anyone who wants to apply for telecommuting may submit an application immediately.
Your new account executive is Edward Ho.
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Although the two files seem identical, we should proofread each or every page.
Revise the following sentences to eliminate trite phrases.
I will submit your repair request immediately.
Please find the list of customers that will be used in our promotion.
We are sending the contract under separate cover.
Every effort will be made to proceed in accordance.
Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing jargon, slang, clichés, and wordiness.
Our manager insists that we must think differently in promoting our new kitchen tool.
Although we lost in the last contract, you can be sure we will be successful this time.
If we know that is true, our lousy competitor will make another snarky claim that is very insulting and unfair.
If you refer back to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions for preventing spending all the money.
Revise the following sentences to improve clarity and precision.
House’s owner told us that the room would be available for rent soon.
Please contact us as soon as possible.
The manager from that organization notified us about the change in date for the event.
She said that the movie she saw last night was not very