Preview

Not Our Home Poem

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
536 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Not Our Home Poem
I was successful in creating two poems relating to Korean culture. My ideas were creative even though it was similar to the poem about French Revolution. I connected the Korean culture to a major historical event in Korea. “Not Our Home” is a poem from a young Korean boy’s perspective in past tense. It describes how unfair the Japanese were to Koreans and also describes the negative emotions that existed as the Japanese went on ruling Korea. But if you read it on, you can see that all the Koreans have a burning patriotism in their hearts to keep them going and retaliate. I decided to write my poem this way because it’s a fact. Koreans believed that they would get their land back eventually if they kept on trying. Koreans believed that one day, they would be independent and have a place to call home. To emphasize that, I put in repetition and rhythm. I tried not to put in any metaphors, similes nor personifications because if I did, it would kill the mood of the poem and it would kill the tension that was built up in the first few lines. The repetition made it more impactful in emphasizing the patriotism of Koreans as it repeated the words home and how they would not accept the Japanese as their lord. The rhythm just made …show more content…
“A Home” is in that boy’s perspective and past tense as well except that the boy is all grown up now. This poem is basically about how Korea was like after the Japanese retreated. It’s about how Japan sort of influenced Korean culture in a sense and how the main parts of Korean culture was kept hidden only to be spread out after the Japanese retreated. I wrote this poem in this specific way because I thought that was the best way to connect a historical event to Korean culture. I thought it was interesting to tell the readers what Japan had to do with Korean culture as well. To emphasize this, I, again, used a little bit of repetition, rhythm, and a little bit of rhyme. The repetition definitely helped because the

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    The first stanza opens the poem to the setting and exactly what is going on with this mother and son. The poem holds nothing back from the reader with the line, “While she smokes a few white pebbles” (6) which implies that his mother is smoking cocaine and does this with his knowledge, in the moment. It suggests that his mother doesn’t care too much if he is aware and even if she gets him involved in her addiction. “Late winter, sky darkening after school” (1) tells the reader that the teen is educated and his mother even goes and picks him up. The poem also includes that there are “groceries bought from Shop- Mart” and that she drives a Mercedes (2-4) which is another sign that the family has some values like home making and that the family also has money. Lastly, the first stanza will tell the reader where the mother goes to get high and what the building looks like, and it seems to not match the environment that he may be familiar with, but at the same time he knows where he is because he casually mentions the street name “parked on Diamond” (3) as though we should also be familiar with it. The last line “At the house crumbling” (7) suggests that the neighborhood is not kept up and likely does not match a description in which you might fit a Mercedes into.…

    • 966 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    I Was Only 19 Essay

    • 1016 Words
    • 5 Pages

    It made everyone consider the real gains of war and the point of war at all. It challenged the view of many people who thought it was correct that they could use conscription to manipulate the lives of many, especially the young men; many of who were not able to live their life to the full extent because of the wars that they faced. It commented on the lives of being a soldier returned from war. The poet’s purpose in writing this poem was to share the stories and experiences of those who went to war and what they went through. The poem is successful on being a voice for the forgotten heroes, the veterans of the war making a comment on social standards of that time. The overall message of the poem is to find empathy to learn and grow, so many young lives were lost during the Vietnam War, this song was able to combat all who thought it was right to rob this young men; some even younger than 19, of their life, their choices. This song influenced generations to make a change, to stand and find where…

    • 1016 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The narrative structure adopted in this poem is third person limited. In the wife’s point of view, this is effective as a wife wants a family more than husband and belonging to a place is closely tied to belonging in a family.…

    • 347 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    10 Mary Street

    • 322 Words
    • 2 Pages

    * Throughout the poem, the tone is one of empowerment and progress. Their home is a sanctuary, a safety net and protector for thee immigrants in an uncertain world. The house symbolizes the family unit’s connection during this ‘adaption’ process, which presents a positive view of family belonging.…

    • 322 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Loss In Poetry

    • 797 Words
    • 4 Pages

    The poetry written explains the loss of many different notions: It consists of "Printed Hawk": telling of the death of an animal., "Moonlight Night": Tells of the loss of someone., "Spring Prospect": Tells of the loss of a nation., "Quang Village I": Tells of the happiness of his arrival home, however through the despair of the possibility of him not arriving., "My Thatched Roof is Ruined by the Autumn Wind": Tells of pieces of the roof being torn away, and children taking pieces leaving a hole in his roof, and his son's rest not being well because of it., "I stand Alone": Tells of his worry at things not being complete., "Spending the night by a tower by the river: Tells of his loss of sleep due to battles., "Thought while traveling at night": Tells of what he is like at night and being similar to a gull., "Ballad of the Firewood Vendors": Tells of the losses due to battles., And "Autumn Meditation IV": His thoughts are represented on his old homeland". The poems are a creation representing his life and history he has seen, through many losses, sadness grief and pain brought on by…

    • 797 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Overall this poem is the portrayal of a cohesive family unit, working and living harmoniously together.…

    • 840 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    First Poem for You Essay

    • 471 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Tattoos are permanent symbols that last forever, while relationships can’t be guaranteed permanent now a days. Kim Addonizio chooses tattoos as a symbol in this poem “First poem for you.” Water and lightning is what makes the poem most symbolistic. “Lines of lightning pulsing just above your nipple can find as if by instinct the blue swirls of water on your shoulder where a serpent twists facing a dragon.” Though symbols can have more than one meaning to them the poem helps to point of the specific meaning of these symbols.…

    • 471 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    First Poem for You

    • 793 Words
    • 4 Pages

    The Shakespearean sonnet “First Poem for You” has an iambic pentameter and consistent rhyme scheme. Every other line represents a true rhyme – the final accented vowels and all succeeding consonants or syllables are identical. For example the words “complete” and “neat” (Addonizio 1, 3). Every line of the poem has a basic stressed and unstressed syllable format, except the last line. The extension of the last line “but touch them, trying” implements a longer stress (14). I believe this has definite meaning to the structure of the poem. In addition, the final verse of the poem is the longest line. In relation to the word “trying”, I believe that the longer stress and length in the final line of the poem emphasizes the woman continuing to mend the relationship with her boyfriend. The theme of the poem is about love and desire, a woman who cares for her boyfriend seeks to mend the brokenness in their relationship.…

    • 793 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    This work includes poems of homespun wit and sophisticated irony; of family, politics, and existential unease; of love, betrayal, and heartache; of racial…

    • 1253 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    To start off,the main symbolism in the poem was the house itself, I think it is portraying that not all homes were meant for warm smiles, love and laughter; sometimes it could be filled with abuse, tears, fights, and even deaths. In the 15th stanza it says “ The house divided against itself, which to me, represents an abusive-family relationship. Also, the significance of the home is made up of negative memories, in which it impacted a strong emotions, etc. Over all, the house symbolizes a schizophrenic's head and the fighting family represents the internal conflict that goes on inside.…

    • 591 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The title "Homecoming" is used effectively to contrast the traditional universal implications of the word, with the shocking reality of dead soldiers flown home from Vietnam to grieving families. The word 'homecoming' usually implies a celebration or Heroic welcome for a great achievement, with a return to roots and family. However, the title has this return but with a saddening twist, because the homecoming described in the poem is related to death, mourning and loss with the arrival of a nameless body to a home country, this is quite different from the heartfelt joy extended to a loved one at a normal homecoming.…

    • 621 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Considering the historical context is important in the understanding of this poem in that it is clearly connected…

    • 800 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The structure of the poem consists of three different components; the first section describes the anxiety of a bombing mission. The second describes targeting the area and the third, describes flying home. This type of poem is a ballad. The poem is unique because it explains in detail, what would have happened over a series of minutes. Each stanza has its own effect, the third and forth stanzas are longer to produce the effect that when your about to die time slows down. The poem flows with rhythm all the way through it. It is a very anxiety filled piece and shows how people are affected by war.…

    • 566 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The poem also focuses on what life was like in the sixties. It tells of black freedom marches in the South how they effected one family. It told of how our peace officers reacted to marches with clubs, hoses, guns, and jail. They were fierce and wild and a black child would be no match for them. The mother refused to let her child march in the wild streets of Birmingham and sent her to the safest place that no harm would become of her daughter.…

    • 452 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    In this poem, McKay uses imagery to describe the wonderful homeland that he left. He reminisces about his home and is eventually overcome with grief and is brought to tears because of the longing in his heart for his homeland. There are many tone shifts in this poem. He starts off being cheerful but this soon changes to mournfulness. Then, as McKay remembers that he’s stuck in a foreign land, his “eyes [grow] dim” and he “[turns] his head and [weeps].” Through his tone and his actions in this poem, McKay reveals to us that the theme of this poem is that the love of one’s homeland can be rooted into the very soul of someone. He shows this from the perfect view he has of his homeland at the beginning of the poem and the emotion that he is overcome with at the end of the…

    • 766 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays