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In the essay “How much Force is Necessary in Law Enforcement?” the author shows many strengths and weaknesses. The author’s shows weakness in the way he structures his or her sentences. It was hard to sometimes follow along because some of the sentences were hard to understand. There is part of the essay where I believe that there was too much statistics which makes you want to just skip over it. The structure of the essay was good because it was not all over the essay. I would advise the author to add more to the conclusion. Author shows strength in putting citations in the right places. There is also strength in the way the work cited was done.

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